User contributions for 128.63.16.20

18 August 2015

• 17:0717:07, 18 August 2015 diff hist −1 Murder of Bobby Greenlease →Abduction and murder: don't need comma just before "instead"

10 August 2015

• 20:3820:38, 10 August 2015 diff hist −2 Johnny Vander Meer →Baseball career: Remove commas because he certainly had more than one Cincinnati team-mate.

29 July 2015

• 16:5816:58, 29 July 2015 diff hist +35 Gregorio Pietro Agagianian added refefence to cardinal; remove parentheses; notice this man was NOT of the rank of "Cardinal Patriarch"
• 16:2216:22, 29 July 2015 diff hist −2 List of Maronite patriarchs of Antioch →Patriarch during modern Lebanon, 1918–present
• 16:2116:21, 29 July 2015 diff hist +18 List of Maronite patriarchs of Antioch →Patriarch during modern Lebanon, 1918–present
• 16:1916:19, 29 July 2015 diff hist +16 List of Maronite patriarchs of Antioch →Patriarch during modern Lebanon, 1918–present
• 16:1816:18, 29 July 2015 diff hist +37 List of Maronite patriarchs of Antioch →Patriarch during modern Lebanon, 1918–present
• 16:1516:15, 29 July 2015 diff hist +37 List of Maronite patriarchs of Antioch →Patriarch during modern Lebanon, 1918–present: add notes for Khoraish, and fix the ending year
• 16:1216:12, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Anthony Peter Khoraish added "emeritus"
• 16:1116:11, 29 July 2015 diff hist +76 Syriac Catholic Patriarchs of Antioch →Syriac Catholic Patriarchs of Antioch (1783 to present): add reference to cardinals
• 16:0816:08, 29 July 2015 diff hist +19 Melkite Catholic Patriarchate of Antioch →Melkite Greek Catholic Patriarchs of Antioch: add reference to cardinal
• 16:0616:06, 29 July 2015 diff hist 0 Coptic Catholic Patriarchate of Alexandria →Coptic Catholic Patriarchs of Alexandria: oops, place "Cardinal" item in different place
• 16:0516:05, 29 July 2015 diff hist +38 Coptic Catholic Patriarchate of Alexandria →Coptic Catholic Patriarchs of Alexandria: and there were 2 other Cardinal Patriarchs in this list
• 16:0416:04, 29 July 2015 diff hist +19 Coptic Catholic Patriarchate of Alexandria →Coptic Catholic Patriarchs of Alexandria: add elevation to Cardinal (he was a Cardinal Patriarch)
• 16:0216:02, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 List of current popes and patriarchs →Pope, Patriarchs, and Major Archbishops in the Catholic Church: oops, need the word "Cardinal" by itself
• 16:0116:01, 29 July 2015 diff hist +18 List of current popes and patriarchs →Pope, Patriarchs, and Major Archbishops in the Catholic Church: Place the word "Cardinal" out front (WITHOUT use of a comma, because in the College of Cardinals, he does hold rank of Cardinal Patriarch)
• 15:5715:57, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Francis Edward Hyland He resigned before death. He was bishop of Atlanta before it was an archdiocese.
• 15:5415:54, 29 July 2015 diff hist +11 Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Atlanta →Ordinaries: Change the title.
• 15:5315:53, 29 July 2015 diff hist +52 Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Atlanta →Bishops: revisions because an auxiliary bishop is not an ordinary of the diocese
• 15:5015:50, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Eugene Antonio Marino added "emeritus"
• 15:4915:49, 29 July 2015 diff hist +10 List of Catholic archbishops of Atlanta →List of Archbishops of Atlanta: add order designations
• 15:4915:49, 29 July 2015 diff hist +38 List of Catholic archbishops of Atlanta Provide separate list for Bishop of Atlanta (before it became an archdiocese), and fix a misspelling
• 15:3815:38, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Robert Edward Mulvee add "emeritus"; this applies to Providence, which is the last residential see he had
• 15:3715:37, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Louis Edward Gelineau added "emeritus"
• 15:3515:35, 29 July 2015 diff hist +34 Edward Cullen (bishop) Link to diocese of Allentown; add "emeritus"
• 15:3315:33, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Thomas Welsh (bishop) He retired before death; "emeritus
• 15:3215:32, 29 July 2015 diff hist +9 Joseph McShea added "emeritus" because he retired before he died
• 15:3015:30, 29 July 2015 diff hist +57 David B. Thompson provide links to those dioceses' pages
• 15:2815:28, 29 July 2015 diff hist +6 David B. Thompson added "there"; otherwise, we could interpret it as being tapped for chancellor in Phila. archdiocese and not reporting there because he transferred to Allentown
• 15:2515:25, 29 July 2015 diff hist −269 Talk:Roman Catholic Diocese of Limburg →Will someone please account for this? (from a UK article on July 29, 2015)
• 15:2315:23, 29 July 2015 diff hist −269 Talk:Franz-Peter Tebartz-van Elst No edit summary

23 July 2015

• 16:3516:35, 23 July 2015 diff hist +2 July 2012 solar storm add 2 commas because the sentence is so long

20 July 2015

• 15:5915:59, 20 July 2015 diff hist +3 September 1590 papal conclave →Cardinals not attending: For uniformity, add comma after "(aged __)" if such comma wasn't already there.
• 15:5615:56, 20 July 2015 diff hist +1 Pope Urban VII →Election: "brought", not "bought" -- the latter word suggests something was PURCHASED

9 July 2015

• 15:2315:23, 9 July 2015 diff hist +184 Talk:Nicholas Pieck →Year of canonization: new section
• 15:2215:22, 9 July 2015 diff hist +196 Talk:Martyrs of Gorkum →Year they were canonized: new section

7 July 2015

• 14:3114:31, 7 July 2015 diff hist −6 Diomede Falconio Remove "-Segni" because that was not added until later (1981?).
• 14:2914:29, 7 July 2015 diff hist −1 John Timon fix punctuation

18 June 2015

• 16:0516:05, 18 June 2015 diff hist +224 Talk:Love & Mercy (film) →someone named "Graham"?

15 June 2015

• 18:3618:36, 15 June 2015 diff hist +9 John Clayton Nienstedt added "emeritus" due to his resignation

9 June 2015

• 15:1715:17, 9 June 2015 diff hist +1 Nathaniel P. Banks →Shenandoah Valley Campaign: added comma, because previous encounter was NOT at Cedar Mountain
• 15:1615:16, 9 June 2015 diff hist −9 Nathaniel P. Banks I found "Banks's"; remove the trailing s.
• 14:5014:50, 9 June 2015 diff hist 0 Jackson's Valley campaign →Union: The surname "Shields" ends in an "s", so its possessive form consists of apostrophe at the END.
• 14:4714:47, 9 June 2015 diff hist +901 Talk:Jackson's Valley campaign →Shenandoah Valley Campaign
• 14:3914:39, 9 June 2015 diff hist +8 Jackson's Valley campaign Changed "his" to "the Union's".

8 June 2015

• 20:3320:33, 8 June 2015 diff hist 0 Triple Crown of Thoroughbred Racing (United States) →Individual race winners: reword the gray category; these horses won EITHER; Derby & Belmont: OR: Preakness & Belmont (we accounted for Derby & Preakness, omitting Belmont, in the yellow category)
• 17:3717:37, 8 June 2015 diff hist +248 Talk:Pet Sounds →OK, so do we continue with the U.S. version of Rubber Soul?
• 17:3017:30, 8 June 2015 diff hist +363 Talk:Love & Mercy (film) →a fictionalized-for-dramatic-effect item?

5 June 2015

• 15:2715:27, 5 June 2015 diff hist −2 Ted Kennedy →Aftermath: Use "loss", not "defeat".
• 15:1515:15, 5 June 2015 diff hist 0 Ted Kennedy →Fall and rise: Used hyphen, not space.