User contributions for 38.49.72.17

11 July 2024

• 02:3102:31, 11 July 2024 diff hist −115 Renata Tebaldi →Later years: need ref for total number of performances; much cleanup: correcting punctuation, rearranging for clarity and chronology, removing self-contradictory and muddled, unsupported statements, etc; added date of death from cited source
• 02:0902:09, 11 July 2024 diff hist +23 Renata Tebaldi →Voice: need to de-weasel "Some critics"
• 01:5601:56, 11 July 2024 diff hist −1 John Ardoin rmv comma from restrictive appositive: Callas was not the only soprano; correct "aquatinted" (surely a typo, but a funny one) to "acquainted" current
• 01:5101:51, 11 July 2024 diff hist −6 Renata Tebaldi →Tebaldi and Callas: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA
• 01:4601:46, 11 July 2024 diff hist −6 Renata Tebaldi →Tebaldi and Callas: rmv "Maria" per MOS:SURNAME
• 01:4501:45, 11 July 2024 diff hist −6 Renata Tebaldi →Tebaldi and Callas: rmv peacockish "great" per MOS:PEA
• 01:3901:39, 11 July 2024 diff hist −15 Renata Tebaldi →The Met: rmv editorial "Unfortunately," per MOS:OPED: "Wikipedia should not take a view on whether an event was fortunate or not"

10 July 2024

• 21:0521:05, 10 July 2024 diff hist −9 John Patrick Shanley →Career: in caption, correct "the 23rd of March" to "March 23" per MOS:DATESNO
• 19:2419:24, 10 July 2024 diff hist +12 Moonstruck →Critical response: correct ambiguous "critics'" to "Siskel's and Ebert's"

9 July 2024

• 17:1817:18, 9 July 2024 diff hist −2 Bell Witch →Legend synopsis: rmv unjustified quotation marks from character's name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 17:1317:13, 9 July 2024 diff hist −4 Bell Witch rmv "and/", which adds nothing but weaselly ambiguity to "or", which in itself does not exclude the possibility of "and", per MOS: ANDOR Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 05:1805:18, 9 July 2024 diff hist −28 Requiem shark rmv instructional and presumptuous "it's important to note that" per MOS:NOTE Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:2304:23, 9 July 2024 diff hist −8 Dulux →History: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 July 2024

• 17:4817:48, 8 July 2024 diff hist +11 Lithium-ion battery →Voltage limits: correct "Up to now, the system still operates safely" to "As of June 2024, the system was still operating safely" per the date of the cited ref and MOS:RELTIME
• 08:5808:58, 8 July 2024 diff hist −14 Eutrochium →Uses: rmv unencyclopedic and peacockish "of plant fame" per MOS:PEA current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 July 2024

• 18:1618:16, 7 July 2024 diff hist 0 Børns →Personal life: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:1118:11, 7 July 2024 diff hist −2 Børns →2015–2017: Dopamine and touring: rmv quotation marks from tour name Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 July 2024

• 23:3123:31, 6 July 2024 diff hist −3 Meat Loaf →Family and residences: correct biased "claimed" to neutral "said" per MOS:SAY Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:0423:04, 6 July 2024 diff hist −8 It's All Coming Back to Me Now correct "Alternately" to "Alternatively"; rmv incongruous and unnecessary "that"; clean up garbled text Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:5821:58, 6 July 2024 diff hist +9 Alone (i-Ten song) →Music video: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA; link and correct spelling and format of Romeo and Juliet Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 July 2024

• 11:4411:44, 5 July 2024 diff hist −3 Vinyl chloride rmv comma from restrictive appositive: PVC is not the only polymer
• 11:3711:37, 5 July 2024 diff hist +62 Polyvinyl chloride add infobox ImageCaption2 using info from image file page

4 July 2024

• 20:4320:43, 4 July 2024 diff hist −4 Pete Townshend →Hearing loss: rmv unnecessary and ambiguous "now"
• 20:3920:39, 4 July 2024 diff hist −7 Pete Townshend →Hearing loss: rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA
• 20:3220:32, 4 July 2024 diff hist −6 Pete Townshend →1972–present: solo career: rmv peacockish "noted" per MOS:PEA
• 20:0720:07, 4 July 2024 diff hist +5 Pete Townshend →Early life and education: correct "Pete" to "Townshend" per MOS:SURNAME
• 04:1104:11, 4 July 2024 diff hist −2 Ditalini →Use in dishes: rmv inappropriate quotation marks Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:0204:02, 4 July 2024 diff hist 0 Now You See Me (film series) relocate misplaced "more" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 July 2024

• 14:4614:46, 3 July 2024 diff hist −6 Intermediate bulk container →Rigid IBC tanks: rmv "/or", which adds only weaselly ambiguity to "and", since "or" is implicit in the context, per MOS:ANDOR; miscellaneous clean up Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 July 2024

• 00:3000:30, 2 July 2024 diff hist 0 Flindersia maculosa →Uses: rmv errant comma; correct verb number to agree with plural subject current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 July 2024

• 20:5920:59, 1 July 2024 diff hist −5 Hasselblad →Apollo program: update verb tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

30 June 2024

• 07:2207:22, 30 June 2024 diff hist −32 Phoenix Sky Harbor International Airport correct meaninglessly ambiguous "presently" to "As of 2023" (access date of cited ref) per MOS:RELTIME; correct unencyclopedic editorial fluff "holds the distinction of being" to "was" and rmv editorial hyperbole "entire" per MOS:OPED, etc Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:5906:59, 30 June 2024 diff hist −21 Kristina Wagner →Personal life: correct euphemistic "after losing his battle with addiction" to "of drug addiction" per MOS:EUPHEMISM Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 June 2024

• 07:4207:42, 29 June 2024 diff hist +114 Honda Pilot →Design: need to explain what "stadium seating" means here—the linked article mentions only stadiums, not vehicles Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:4304:43, 29 June 2024 diff hist −2 Potassium iodide →Dietary supplement: rmv inappropriate hyphens from "Potassium-iodide" and "nutritional-supplement"; rmv unjustified quotation marks from "iodizing"

27 June 2024

• 04:4004:40, 27 June 2024 diff hist −8 Ed Wynn →Radio: rmv peacockish "popular" per MOS:PEA
• 01:5201:52, 27 June 2024 diff hist −9 The Help (film) →Box office: rmv instructional and presumptuous "Notably," per MOS:NOTE

26 June 2024

• 23:3123:31, 26 June 2024 diff hist −25 Michael S. Heiser →Personal life and death: correct euphemistic "succumbed to his illness" to "died" per MOS:EUPHEMISM; rmv editorial "just" per MOS:OPED Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 June 2024

• 20:3620:36, 23 June 2024 diff hist −9 Molly Kazan rmv obstructive link pipe "|Nicholas": other names in the infobox are not similarly truncated current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:3120:31, 23 June 2024 diff hist −17 Molly Kazan rmv peacockish "influential" per MOS:PEA; rmv "film", since he was equally a theater director Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:2020:20, 23 June 2024 diff hist −4 James Earl Jones rmv unnecessary and ambiguous indefinite articles Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:2502:25, 23 June 2024 diff hist −3 Expandable water toy correct "between" to "from" introducing terms separated by "to" ("between" properly requires "and") Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 June 2024

• 21:2621:26, 20 June 2024 diff hist +2 Yma Sumac correct ambiguous "At the same time" to "During the same period"; rmv unidiomatic "the" before "Carnegie Hall" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:5120:51, 20 June 2024 diff hist −2 Dot matrix printing correct "It" to "They" for agreement with the antecedent "impact printers"; rewrite garbled text Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:2813:28, 20 June 2024 diff hist −41 Bert Schneider →Death: rmv "...survived by..." per MOS:SURVIVEDBY: Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a newspaper
• 12:4512:45, 20 June 2024 diff hist −5 Candice Bergen →Personal life: rmv irrelevant "late": he was alive when she was "in a relationship with" him, and she was not involved in his death, so the fact that he died later is irrelevant here Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 June 2024

• 23:2823:28, 19 June 2024 diff hist −27 Waterloo (1970 film) →Box Office: prune verbosity, rearrange text for clarity, rmv peacockish "famous" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 23:2123:21, 19 June 2024 diff hist −27 Waterloo (1970 film) rmv editorial "tragic" per MOS:OPED and peacockish "unsurpassed" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:5820:58, 19 June 2024 diff hist −20 Gunhild Carling correct peacockish "is well known for playing" to "plays" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:2919:29, 19 June 2024 diff hist −18 Paul Newman →Early life and family: rmv peacockish "notable" per MOS:PEA Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit