Talk:Devil Survivor 2: The Animation/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:25, 16 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks to be in good shape but there are some issues that should be touched before passing it:

The references has inconsistent linking. Pony Canyon is not linked while the rest of the publishers are linked.
Alternatively, the Square Enix site could be used to source the book materials.
If possible (though not necessary for a GA), the reception section could be expanded. Check [1], or [2].

Anyway, Good work in the article.Tintor2 (talk) 14:25, 16 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I need to rewrite a few things as well. Anyway thanks for taking up the review and sorry about the wait. —KirtZ^Message 15:55, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done. I didnt add the Fandom Post review since they have individual episode reviews and I'll try to merge most of their main points into a single paragraph at a later date. I also took some of Lucia's suggestions from here. I think it should be fine now. —KirtZ^Message 17:40, 22 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Great work.Tintor2 (talk) 01:41, 23 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]