LBM Final Script
LBM Final Script
LAST
BLACK
MAN
IN
SAN
FRANCISCO
4 .11.18
Screenplay by Story by
Joe Talbot & Rob Richert Joe Talbot & Jimmie Fails
1 EXT. HP SHIPYARDS / HP BUS STOP - SUNRISE
The little girl breaks her gaze and begins down the street,
running her hand along the caution tape. A voice appears.
PREACHER (O.S.)
Why they got suits on and we don't?
Something is going on right in
front of our face. But you stuck on
your i-phone, j-phone 12, whatever.
Blow up in your hand! You cant
Google whats goin’ on right now.
They lucky I’m a man of god now. Or
I’d suicide bomb this mother-.
PREACHER
Are ya’ll paying attention? Why do
they have suits on and we don’t?...
Why?!?! Listen to me man!
PREACHER
They here to clean this water? Man,
this water been funky as the devils
mouth for fifty years and now they
wanna clean it up?!?!… Not for you
and me, no sir! They got plans for
us.
PREACHER (O.S.)
They got those suits on lookin like
a George Jetson rejects because
they weak. Weak hearts. Weak lungs.
They cant even breathe out here
without a mask on. We were made to
be put through hell to be purified.
(MORE)
2.
JIMMIE
Crazy what jail will do to a nigga.
PREACHER
They lucky I’m a man of God now or
they’d catch this fade!
JIMMIE
You think he rehearses this every
morning?
MONTGOMERY
Seems a bit more impromptu.
JIMMIE
Hm?
MONTGOMERY
I think he’s improv-ing.
PREACHER
It’s 2019 out here, we been yelling
about this water since before they
was born!
Jimmie looks anxiously for the bus down the empty road.
Camera begins to slowly push towards him.
JIMMIE
Where’s this bus, man? We’re gonna
be late.
MONTGOMERY
We’ll get there.
PREACHER
So I urge y’all to fight for your
land!
JIMMIE
We’re not gonna get there, bro.
3.
PREACHER
Fight for your home! Fight! For!
Your! Home!
JIMMIE
Let’s skate.
PREACHER (V.O.)
This here, THIS is the edge brah.
The final frontier of manifest
destiny. The last edge of the city,
last edge of the country! Man, two
steps further and you'd be drinking
that filthy salt water.
2.1 ILLINOIS ST BRIDGE - Jimmie and Mont skate over the bridge.
PREACHER
We built these ships, dredged these
canals, in the San Francisco they
never knew existed.
2.2 HP CORNER STORE - The young men shoot past a corner store
with a man sitting in front of a mural of himself. He waves.
PREACHER (V.O.)
And now they wanna build something
new?!? Whole blocks half in the
past, half in the future.
2.4 BERNAL HILL - Jimmie and Mont climb a mountainous hill, the
sun rising over the shipyards at their back. As they summit
the final red boulder, we see a sprawling civilization below.
4.
PREACHER (V.O.)
But should you venture into their
San Francisco, the one they pillage
for gold, remember your truth in
the city of facades.
2.5 EXT. DOWNTOWN - MORNING - Mont turns and stares out at all
the commuters. He drinks in the city’s new population.
PREACHER (V.O.)
Look at them look at you, look down
at you. But we built them.
PREACHER (V.O.)
We are these homes. Their eyes...
Two big attic windows, like eyes stare down on the street.
PREACHER (V.O.)
Their pointed brims.
PREACHER
We move as they move.
PREACHER
Our sweat, soaked in the wood.
PREACHER
Gilded in our image.
Jimmie and Mont approach the front gate and peer through the
bars.
MONTGOMERY
Are you sure they’re gone?
JIMMIE
(almost to himself)
Her car’s gone...
MONTGOMERY
(trying to appear normal)
How you doing?
MONTGOMERY (CONT’D)
Let’s check the back, hm? Remember
that time he was in the kitchen?
6.
JIMMIE
Sure, yeah- But bra, did I not tell
you...
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
It’s Periwinkle. Not Black.
Mont ascends the step jotting this down into his book.
MONTGOMERY
Mhmm, got it.
JIMMIE
Ugh. This garden is a nightmare...
MONTGOMERY
I’ll bring my Grandpa’s tools next
time.
JIMMIE
Sick...
JIMMIE
Jesus, wallpaper’s peeling too.
These people...
MONTGOMERY
Yeah but Jim, you’re not gonna go
inside.
JIMMIE
They’re definitely gone though.
MONTGOMERY
Let’s be quick this time, hm?
JIMMIE
Yeah I know. It just takes time.
7.
MONTGOMERY
I know, I’ll be at my spot.
JIMMIE
Jesus!
MARY AND TERRY ZWIGOTT stand there. Mary has a fruit in her
hand ready to throw.
MARY
He’s back again?! GET THE HECK
OUTTA HERE MAN!
TERRY
Hun, those are 3 dollars!
MARY
Stop fffixing my house!
JIMMIE
I’m almost done. Hold on.
MARY
Go paint the neighbors! Theirs is
worse than ours!
JIMMIE
I’m almost done!
MARY
Look, we will call the cops, man!
I’m serious this time.
8.
TERRY
We’re NOT gonna call the cops. Just
stop coming back.
JIMMIE
Fine. I’ll finish it next time.
God.
MARY
NEXT TI- GET OFF MY FUCKING BIRDIE
BATH!
Jimmie jumps off. BULLSEYE! She pegs him with a bread loaf.
JIMMIE
Water the plants in the back or I
will!
MARY
Ugh! Why am I always the villain?
TERRY
Honey, I don’t like these divisive
terms like villain.
MARY
It’s insulting...I’m at the
hospital all day long. I wish I had
time to just fix up the house...
wierd-ass kid.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Bro, you were supposed to be look
out.
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
I got distracted.
JIMMIE
You were the one so worried about
them coming home!
They laugh.
9.
JIMMIE
Bra, what if OG is right - you
should really stop eating the fish
out there.
MONTGOMERY
I think it’s fine, I mean all fish
has mercury.
JIMMIE
No, but I saw a seagull with a
dick, dude.
MONTGOMERY
Well so, I guess it was male.
JIMMIE
Na bra, like a human dick.
Something wrong with that water,
bra.
MONTGOMERY
Eh, my grandpa said the hazmats are
just there to scare us.
JIMMIE
Nooo bro, they’re not...
NITTY
Bra, don't kick that Tumbleweave on
me.
Nitty dodges the ball of dirt, weave, and god knows what.
STUNNA
Aye Kofi, I seen your moms, she was
missing a little bit on top.
MONTGOMERY
I mean, we shower in the same
water, Jimmie.
GUNNA
So now these niggas showering
together?
FRESH
Probably was.
KOFI
Thats fruity.
JIMMIE
Naw I was trying to tell him don’t
eat the fish, it’s toxic.
NITTY
Well. Duh. They built the atomic
bomb right there.
MONTGOMERY
(whispering to Nitty)
I don’t think that’s true.
MONTGOMERY
(whispering to Grandpa)
He’s walking him into the Chief’s
office.
GRANDPA
(smiling)
Oh dear...
GRANDPA
Now who's that?
JIMMIE
Edward O. Ryan?
MONTGOMERY
Mhm, Edmond O’Brien, that’s right.
MONTGOMERY
Oh god.
JIMMIE
What? How?
MONTGOMERY
Just watch.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Hey Mont. Montgomery... How do I
get them out of the house?
MONTGOMERY
Hm?
JIMMIE
What if I pee'd on their table?
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Like - I just climb the birdie
bath, broke in, and pee'd all over
the little stupid yellow table?
MONTGOMERY
Wouldn't that ruin the floors?
Jimmie climbs into his cot on the floor, nested snug between
the bathroom and Montgomery’s bed.
JIMMIE
Yeah I guess you got a point there.
MONTGOMERY
44 magnum.
JIMMIE
10 blocks.
MONTGOMERY
Closer.
JIMMIE
Hm....Maybe they’d let me live
there as like a caretaker for the
house.
MONTGOMERY
We like having you here Jim.
JIMMIE
I know bra...But there’s no place
like home.
13.
JIMMIE
Did you get any writing done this
morning?
MONTGOMERY
Eh. Mngh. Writing is rewriting.
It's all a part of it-
MONTGOMERY
I can help you, ma’am.
JIMMIE
(to Lizzie)
Oh, no, don't get up.
PHYLLIS
Thank you James.
JIMMIE
Us natives gotta stick together.
STUNNA (O.S.)
He SO soft tho. You old marshmallow
powderpuff ass nigga.
Gunna and Fresh laugh hard as Kofi gets roasts. Nitty pushes
through the uproar and gets in Kofi’s face, laughing.
NITTY
You weak brah - you a bitch!
Mont, walking home across the street sees Kofi getting punked
by his friends. Mont sets his bag down staring intently.
NITTY (O.S.)
I should snatch your one ass dread
lookin like a Rastafarian sperm.
KOFI
Man, y’all got me fucked up.
STUNNA
He got you fucked up!?!? Thats all
you got to say.
KOFI
Man what am I ‘sposed to do take
off on him?!?
16.
NITTY
Psh - you know why he ain’t got
nothing else to say?!? I put that
on the fact that this niggas a
bitch brah.
MONTGOMERY
What's up nigga? What...is up
nigga? Sup nigguh? Was good neeguh?
Hey nigga! How are you nigga? Good
day, nigga.
Mont opens the door in his long johns to find Jimmie standing
at his mirror. He's in low-hanging jeans and a studded belt,
considering two different goon shirts.
Montgomery freezes.
MONTGOMERY
Are you going to see your dad?
JIMMIE
I mean, I was thinking about it.
But nah. You ready to go?
17.
MONTGOMERY
Nearly, I’ll get my tools.
JIMMIE
Man where is this bus. We got hella
gardening.
MONTGOMERY
Hey Jim... didn’t you used to live
in that car?
JIMMIE
Oh god.
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
From a house to an El Dorado.
BOBBY
Jimmay!
JIMMIE
(unenthusiastically)
Hey, Bobby.
BOBBY
Haha! Whats your farming ass doing
in the street with a rake?
The car does an illegal U-turn, hitting the curb across the
street, and screeches to a halt in front of the young men.
BOBBY
Where y'all headed?
18.
BOBBY
Jimmie the farmer - with your bitch
ass.
JIMMIE
Still the same.
BOBBY
Yeah! I like what you and your Pops
did with it.
JIMMIE
So much you drove off with it?
BOBBY
Aw, I'm just borrowing it. But man,
I seen your daddy the other day.
That man is alone!
BOBBY
Wooh! So alone.
JIMMIE
Okay?
BOBBY
I told him get a woman, or a dog!
Something!
JIMMIE
Bro...you live in a car...by
yourself.
BOBBY
Yeah, I'm not alone! People like
me, I'm liked. He over there alone,
spitting sunflower seeds in a cup.
19.
JIMMIE
Well maybe you should go hang out
with him.
BOBBY
Maybe YOU should go hang with him!
When's the last time YOU seen him?
BOBBY
That's why a man has kids, keep him
company, shit.
BOBBY
Look at these motherfuckers. You
know how many of them Imma outlive?
BOBBY (CONT’D)
Park full of ulcers and panic
attacks. Hemorrhoids. Wanting
responsibility. Tryna own what’s
temporary.
BOBBY (CONT’D)
Shit, that’s gonna be them next
though.
BOBBY (CONT’D)
Used to be 100 motherfuckers in
there. With rent control. They
thought that was theirs too.
Landlord burned ‘em out. Cuz he
thought it was his. But you can’t
never own land in America.
BOBBY (CONT’D)
This car ain’t mine and it wasn’t
never yours. Imma’ outlive your ass
too, Jimmie.
20.
19.1 The worker breaths his smoke at Jimmie like a devil. The
faint sounds of striking hammers rise. We push towards the
worker, over the fence, and in the depths of hot tar fields.
JIMMIE
Excuse me, what’s going on?
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Sir, what’s happening?
ARTURO
She’s beautiful and I like her, but
right now I cannot do that, because
she fighting.
JIMMIE
What? Fighting what, who?
ARTURO
Fighting because her sister wants
to get her out the house. I cannot
be here.
JIMMIE
Fighting about what?
ARTURO
Yeah because her mom died and now
whose gonna have the house? Who
gonna posses the house?
21.
JIMMIE
But for what?
ARTURO
That’s what white people do, they
lose a family and they wanna
collect it, and grab it, and posses
it. This is mine, this is yours. I
cannot help her. It’s
unprofessional.
MONTGOMERY
So what happens to it now?
MONTGOMERY
Wanna...Get...Candy?
LORETTA
10 bucks, sweetheart.
22.
LORETTA
Since that’s the best deal you're
gonna get for sixty Twix, hon.
LORETTA
I don’t know your life.
MONTGOMERY
Why'd they have to move out because
her mother died?
JIMMIE
I don't know...I wish they didn't
though. They were tasteless but at
least they didn't fuck it up.
LORETTA
Well if it isn't our own Tyler
Perry. When you gonna put me in one
of your plays?
MONTGOMERY
(blushes)
Do you have any Saltwater Taffy,
Loretta?
LORETTA
You're the only reason I stock up
on that nasty shit, so yes I do.
The usual, Jimmie?...Jimmie?
JIMMIE
Yeah. Six please.
LORETTA
Grrah - you’re gonna get fat again.
23.
Mont lays on the sidewalk chewing his candy with his mouth
open as Jimmie stares in his lap, pensive. A moment passes.
JIMMIE
(under his breath)
Yeah, fuck you back bra.
MONTGOMERY
Jesus. Who's that?
JIMMIE
This fool Andy. Me and my dad used
to squat with him and these fiends.
ANDY ROY
Hell ride! HAHA!
CLAYTON
So did I have a dick in my mouth?
Or, like, a Hitler mustache?
JIMMIE
Hitler mustache.
24.
CLAYTON
Fuck dude. They make us put our
faces on that stuff, so lame. Guess
it works though.
JIMMIE
Yeah we're curious about a house on
Golden Gate, near Fillmore?
CLAYTON
Golden Gate, yeah, okay. Which one?
JIMMIE
74, it's grey with like gold trim
and uh-
CLAYTON
Yup yup, with the witch hat.
JIMMIE
Yeah, exactly.
CLAYTON
That place is pretty special, man.
I used to drive past there on my
way to school every day.
JIMMIE
Where'd you go to school?
CLAYTON
St. Ignatius. You're from here too?
JIMMIE
Third generation.
CLAYTON
Right on! Honestly, that's the kind
of property that got me into this.
If I had it, I’d take out the
inside, keep the old facade, ya
know- But, so it's for sale? I
didn't even hear about that.
JIMMIE
Well, I'm not sure. It seems like
the owner and her sister are
fighting over it.
25.
CLAYTON
The owner?
JIMMIE
Well the lady that was living
there. But I guess her mom died.
CLAYTON
Oh man. Oof. That sounds like an
estate thing. That's a sucky
situation.
CLAYTON (CONT'D)
...and with a house like that?
They’ll be fighting over that for
years.
JIMMIE
For years?
CLAYTON
While it just sits there, yeah,
it’s a pity.
JIMMIE
So it's really just empty?
CLAYTON
Yeah, fucked up right? All these
people on the street while these
big ol’ houses just collect dust.
But shit, cold world no blanket.
Sorry I couldn't be more helpful.
JIMMIE
Yeah...
JIMMIE
Bra.
JIMMIE
No taste.
26.1 FRONT HALLWAY - Empty. But the muffled sounds of new life -
rumbling footsteps and roused voices - creep closer through
the walls and ventilation.
26.2 ATTIC - Still empty. But the stomping grows louder, breathing
more life into the creaking floorboards.
26.3 LIBRARY - Laughter echoes off the walls. The house is coming
alive.
26.4 FRONT HALLWAY - Galumphing now thunders off the walls until -
SILENCE - Jimmie arrives in front of us.
26.5 MASTER BEDROOM - Jimmie rolls over onto his back, blood
spilling from his lip as he laughs hysterically.
JIMMIE
(to himself)
Na bra.
26.6 EXT. BALCONY - Jimmie pushes the window open and steps out.
TOUR GUIDE
Before the black stuff, this was a
all Japanese, ‘til FDR’s storm
troopers rounded em up into camps-
28.
JIMMIE
(yelling)
This house was buuh!-
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Sorry-
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
This was built in the 1940s.
TOUR GUIDE
(laughs)
Hey there amigo! Uh huh- Let's wave
to our neighbor here everybody.
JIMMIE
1946.
TOUR GUIDE
Hhhhm gonna have to disagree with
you there dudeman. No architect in
the 1940s was building in this
style.
JIMMIE
That's probably true, but this
house wasn't built by an architect.
My grandpa built this.
TOUR GUIDE
Hm. Thats pretty amazing! Well, on
we go to our next stop: the closet
Patty Hearst willfully hid herself
in.
The young men huddle around the orange glow of the fireplace
roasting hot dogs. The crackling fire almost feels like a
beating heart. Their long, phantom shadows climb the high
empty walls behind them.
MONTGOMERY
It's a beautiful house, Jim.
Jimmie takes that in, knowing Mont wouldn't just say it.
MONTGOMERY
More beautiful than I could have
imagined.
JIMMIE
Yeah. Not there yet but, almost.
28.1 FRONT HALLWAY - Jimmie runs his hand along the wood paneling
of the staircase.
28.2 PARLOR - Jimmie stands under an archway, blue and green light
hits his face.
JIMMIE
Mont, wake up.
MONTGOMERY
Your hair...it fits the archway
like a puzzle piece.
JIMMIE
Telling you bro, I belong here.
28.3 ATTIC - Back inside the empty witch hat, Jimmie’s minds eye
twirls upwards towards the ceiling.
GRANDPA (V.O.)
And what’s happening now?
JIMMIE (V.O.)
He’s flying through the air.
GRANDPA (V.O.)
C’mon now.
JIMMIE (V.O.)
He’s flying through the air.
GRANDPA (V.O.)
Jimmie, your Grandpa was a Godly
man but he did not have super
powers.
JIMMIE
He’s on a crane, it’s hauling him
and the witch hat way high up.
GRANDPA
Wait! You got video of that day?
JIMMIE
Yeah, my dad filmed it.
GRANDPA
Hm!
The witch hat – and Jimmie’s Grandpa - are lowered until they
attach to the top of “The House.” Claps and cheers rise from
a crowd below. Jimmie’s grandpa waves from up high.
JIMMIE
Wait. How do you pause? - I think I
saw Willie Mays.
GRANDPA
Willie? No, this was after that.
MONTGOMERY
Willie Mays was at the house?
GRANDPA
Mhm. Willie came and paid his
respects like we all did. You'd get
here and you'd go see Pastor Jimmie
Fails, "the first black man in San
Francisco.”
GRANDPA
Takes a lot of charisma to let
people call you that. But he wasn't
far off.
JIMMIE
Mr. Allen, I was also wondering can
I borrow that one picture?
GRANDPA
Sure son, I ain't looking at it..
JIMMIE
That's gonna be us in a few hours.
We pull wide as the train shoots past cookie cutter homes and
rolling, sun scorched hills. We're not in Frisco anymore.
A shirtless kid lies on his back across the street, his head
hanging upside down just off the curb. A pink lowrider
rumbles past. The kid flips over to reorient himself.
WANDA
Oh Jimmie! Jimmie Jimmie Jimmie!
WANDA
It's so good to see you, sweetie.
33.
JIMMIE
Man, he better not break my board.
WANDA
You should be telling him thank
you, he helped me pick out that
board.
(looks at Ricky lusty)
Besides, sometimes it’s nice just
to watch. Ricky, do that trick you
used to do!
JIMMIE
Y’all hella cute- uh, how much of
the stuff you still have, Auntie?
WANDA
(imitating Jimmie)
Oh you wanna see the STUFF? You
wanna see the STUFF?
(turning to Montgomery)
Has he been a good house guest for
you? Or does he just show up asking
you for your things?
MONTGOMERY
Oh um. Uh - not yet no.
WANDA
Uh huh, well if you gentlemen can
spare the time - I did set the beds
up in the back and Ricky’s making
his adobo.
JIMMIE
Auntie I would love to but honestly
we should head back tonight. I got
my first place.
34.
WANDA
Woah...wow! In the city? Look at
you. Y'all must be doing pretty
well to afford a spot there.
Wanda smiles at Mont, who drinks his water like he's chewing
it.
JIMMIE
Yeah, we got lucky. It's super
empty thoough...
WANDA
Uhuh- And your daddy didn't send
you here right?
JIMMIE
No.
WANDA
You're sure?
JIMMIE
Swear to god.
WANDA
Cause I hope he's done dragging you
into his schemes.
JIMMIE
Auntie. This is for us.
WANDA
Okay...Okay! Jayboe, I'm so proud
of you man, I miss that place.
JIMMIE
Damn, I knew you had some of it,
but is this everything?
35.
WANDA
Everything your dad didn’t smoke
up.
Jimmie nods.
WANDA
Sorry hun, that came out a little
harsh.
JIMMIE
I'm fine.
JIMMIE
Woah. That's mainey.
WANDA
I always had a feeling - out of the
family, you'd be the one to come
looking for this stuff.
JIMMIE
What's that?
WANDA
Oh that's my own little thing. From
now. You know I always wanted to be
a DJ.
JIMMIE
I didn't know that.
WANDA
Yeah, and it's a nice way to get to
know people out here. I just ask
'em questions and record it.
JIMMIE
That's dope.
WANDA
I'll have Ricky play it for you on
the way back. He can drive y'all.
JIMMIE
Thank you auntie. I didn't wanna
ask, but...
36.
WANDA
Psh, he doesn't mind, right Ricky?
RICKY
Be nice to move somebody back for
once.
Golden light strikes the rows of crops as they fly by. The
clean lines dance in perfect rhythm, one after the next.
JANE (V.O.)
Sometimes, after a long day, I like
to come home and put my head
against Ponchy's chest.
(giggles)
And when he takes a sip of beer, I
can hear the bubbles, um, bubbling.
WANDA (V.O.)
Mhm, please thank Ponchy for
letting us put a mic on his tummy.
WANDA (V.O.)
And who's this we have here?
JANE (V.O.)
Well, Pepper only snores like this
when she's tuckered out from a long
hike. So that usually makes me feel
good, like we had an eventful day.
Ricky leans back and slides open the cab window. He shouts,
but we can barely hear him.
RICKY
How y'all doing back there?
37.
JANE (V.O.)
I suppose, most of the sounds I
like are probably pretty regular.
WANDA (V.O.)
(in a punch-in)
Far from it. Today we're joined by
our wonderful neighbor Jane from
Pine St. And now I encourage you to
listen to the sounds of your home.
36.5 PARLOR - Mont runs a finger along the beads of a glass lamp.
36.6 ATTIC - The sound of wind howling and windows shaking. Ricky
peels away, waving bye to the young men through the window.
36.7 EXT. “THE HOUSE” - All the sounds culminate in a full chorus.
It's as if the skeleton of the house - now filled with
furniture and people - has pulsing organs and blood pumping
through it. A toilet flushes.
MONTGOMERY
So Ricky never lived here, eh?
38.
JIMMIE
Nah, Wanda was in this rock
climbing phase, dating this white
dude.
Jimmie trots down the steps and towards the man, with warm
purpose. Tim looks up, surprised.
JIMMIE
Hi sir. I'm Jimmie Fails, we
haven't yet had the chance to meet.
Jimmie wipes his dusty hand and extends it. Tim takes it
instinctively. Jimmie shakes as if sealing a deal.
JIMMIE
Welcome to the neighborhood!
TIM ELLORY
A-ha ah, yes! Welcome. Tim! Tim
Ellory.
TIM ELLORY
Geez, fast moving market huh, I
don't remember a sign going up.
JIMMIE
Didn't need to, but look Tim - I
really want you to know I’m gonna
to be the best neighbor you ever
had.
TIM ELLORY
Well...alright Jimmie. Thank you!
JIMMIE
My pleasure. You'll have to pardon
me, we've got lots to do.
TIM ELLORY
Oh, of course.
Silence.
JIMMIE
I’m gonna drink my coffee and
scratch my ass while I read the
paper.
MONTGOMERY
You don’t even read the paper.
JIMMIE
Cuz I never had a home to read it
in.
MONTGOMERY
You think this can be really be our
home?
Silence.
JIMMIE
Yeah.
(beat)
I just don’t want to have to keep
it secret, and lie, you know.
MONTGOMERY
Sometimes you have to lie.
JIMMIE
Yeah...
MONTGOMERY
Plus, I think you need to be here.
The house needs you. Though I might
be crazy.
40.
JIMMIE
You’re right though. Cuz you know
what’d be actually crazy? Leaving
it empty... Just sitting outside,
staring at it. That’s actually
crazy. We could throw a party... Or
put on one of your plays.
JIMMIE (CONT'D)
We could yell...AHHHHHH!
MONTGOMERY
The neighbors?
JIMMIE
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
MONTGOMERY
Zeeeeeeeeeeeee-hooooo!
STUNNA (O.S.)
THIS. NIGGA'S. A.
STUNNA
BITCH.
GUNNA
(to Nitty)
A van pulled up last night and Kofi
ran off like a bitch.
KOFI
Never bra, I didn't even see them
niggas!
FRESH
Quit lying bra, you saw ‘em.
41.
STUNNA
(to Nitty)
He a liability bra. Li-a-bil-i-ty!
NITTY
Alright, alright, everybody shut
up. Kofi. What happened?
NITTY
Did you run, bra?
KOFI
Na, I didn’t run.
NITTY
Hit me.
KOFI
What?
NITTY
Hit me.
KOFI
For what? You my folks!
NITTY
Fucking hit me!
FRESH
Kofi! Hit that nigga!
NITTY
I SAID HIT ME!
GUNNA
Wow, he actually soft!
NITTY
Haha! GOD DAMNIT man. Who brought
this nigga?
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
That’s great! That’s great! Yes!
MONTGOMERY
What are we...hm....I believe you.
MONTGOMERY
You’re okay there.
MONTGOMERY
Keep building it!
STUNNA
Man, take yo' ass in the house!
FRESH
C'mon bra, he's retarded.
STUNNA
And!?
Jimmie leans off the edge of the balcony, a rope tied to his
belt. He touches up the gold paint he can now finally reach.
43.
JIMMIE
When you drop in bra, lean back.
MONTGOMERY
I'm gonna lean forward.
JIMMIE
Bra. No.
MONTGOMERY
I'm gonna.
JIMMIE
Why would-
MONTGOMERY
Cause I'm gonna get nervous. I'm
just gonna go with that.
JIMMIE
Just- Bra. LEAN BACK. From the
start or your gonna fuck your sh-
MONTGOMERY
Jesus!
JIMMIE
Bruh it’s still not separating.
MONTGOMERY
(groaning)
Just gotta dampen it more.
44.
JIMMIE
I specifically said backwards, bra.
MONTGOMERY
I wanted to know what it feels like
when you eat shit.
Jimmie stashes his board in a bush beside the singer and gives
him a dollar. He crosses the street into a brick building.
JAMES SR.
I seen your cousin Al the other
day. Down there struttin’ around,
like a Frisco fruit cup. I know his
daddy mad as hell!
JAMES SR.
You still skateboarding?
JIMMIE
Nah.
JAMES SR.
Hm.
45.
JIMMIE
What?
JAMES SR.
C'mere and help me cut these out.
JIMMIE
Remember that warehouse we squatted
at with Andy and them?
JAMES SR.
Who? Those satanists?
JIMMIE
Ha, yeah, we lost it cause we
didn't pay taxes, right?
JAMES SR.
Hell na, I paid OUR share of
property tax on that. But who
cares, ol’ drafty-ass roach nest.
JIMMIE
But so, why were you doing all
that? We were able to stay there
right? Nobody was fucking with us.
JAMES SR.
At the time, yeah, but we were
trying to get it so if the cops
showed up, we could say we paid
taxes and they’d have to leave us
the fuck alone. Shit, it was that
or sleeping on the street with your
little ass.
JIMMIE
Right, appreciate it dad. So... if
I'm at a place now, owners left it,
and I'm gonna pay taxes-
JAMES SR.
And you put the gas and electric in
your name?
46.
JIMMIE
Right, I'm doing that next. But, if
I been working on it for 3 years,
rent doesn't have to be cash,
right? Labor counts as payment?
JAMES SR.
You've been working on a house 3
years? What you been doing?
JIMMIE
Painting, gardening, I fixed the
stairs up. I prolly still got a
bunch of the receipts too.
JAMES SR.
Okay, okay! You doing it like your
old man. That's good. And nobody's
come by to check on it?
JIMMIE
Nope, it's empty.
JAMES SR.
Good, that buys you time. They been
gone 3 years?
JIMMIE
Na, just recently.
JAMES SR.
Wait what? You were doing work
while they were still in it?
JIMMIE
Yeah.
JAMES SR.
Where's this house?
JIMMIE
It's the house, in Fillmore.
JAMES SR.
What house?
JIMMIE
Our old house.
JAMES SR.
Fuck you mean our old house? Have
you seen that house?
47.
JIMMIE
Yeah, I go there a lot.
JAMES SR.
Then you would know that’s not your
house. And that’s not your black
ass neighborhood.
JAMES SR.
Little disrespectful, lying ass...
JIMMIE
What? I'm not-
JAMES SR.
Nigga, I know you skateboard.
JIMMIE
Oka-
JAMES SR.
Yeah I see all the shit down there,
everybody's little path. I'm like
30 steps ahead of y’all.
They fall back into silence. Jimmie picks up the scissors and
starts cutting the labels.
JAMES SR.
Go on and get. Messing up my day.
JAMES SR.
Go on.
NAKED MAN
Excuse me, have you been waiting
long?
JIMMIE
(vacantly)
Hella long, bro. I might just
skate.
NAKED MAN
Oh that's nice.
ZACH
Oo! This guy fucks! Ey. Sundeep!!!
Bro... This guy fucks!
NAKED MAN
Oh, this city.
JIMMIE
I already know bra.
Jimmie bombs an epic hill, pink and purple clouds behind him.
His board wobbles more...and more...and PHWACK! He dives face
first into the ground as we cut to:
BOOM-BOOM-CRACK.
JIMMIE
FUCK!
MONTGOMERY
You okay?
JIMMIE
Yeah.
MONTGOMERY
What is this?
JIMMIE
This little room I used to come in
when my dad was doing his thing.
Cool right?
MONTGOMERY
Yeah man. Did you see him today?
JIMMIE
Yeah.
MONTGOMERY
How’d it go?
JIMMIE
He said this was a bad idea.
MONTGOMERY
Well what do you think?
JIMMIE
Maybe he’s right.
MONTGOMERY
I thought you said he’s an idiot.
JIMMIE
What if we shouldn’t be here
though?
MONTGOMERY
Who should be here more? Some
millionaire?
MONTGOMERY
They’d want it cause it looks nice.
You’re the reason it looks nice.
JIMMIE
I dunno-
JIMMIE
The fuck?
MONTGOMERY
I invited somebody.
MONTGOMERY
What's good nigga? Glad you could
make it.
MONTGOMERY
Pardon me for a sec.
KOFI
Y’all got a organ?
Kofi notices Jimmie staring at him from the end of the hall.
Kofi nods ‘whats up.’ Jimmie nods back slowly. Kofi continues
to the parlor.
KOFI (O.S.)
Got columns and shit...
KOFI
It's just y'all here?
JIMMIE
Yeah. It just makes noises.
MONTGOMERY
Nice to see you in that chair. I
didn’t know you’d pick that one,
but I think I’m glad you did. It
looks good on you.
KOFI
(eying the chair)
Yeah right on bro, this shit kinda
awkward. But this place hella cool.
MONTGOMERY
Yeah, Jimmie's been doing a lot to
fix it up.
KOFI
How'd y'all get this?
MONTGOMERY
It’s Jimmie’s, his grandpa built
it. He was the first black man in
San Francisco.
KOFI
Oh shit, this that house.
(to Montgomery)
Man, he used to always talk about
this. But you know niggas in group
homes be exaggerating, tryna' act
special. But you were foreal huh?
MONTGOMERY
You were in a group home?
JIMMIE
Yeah. For like a year.
MONTGOMERY
Huh.
52.
MONTGOMERY
You guys wanna go for a schvitz?
JIMMIE
A schwitz?
KOFI
Wait, your grandpa made this, too?
JIMMIE
Nah, these white people did.
KOFI
How was he the first, though?
(turning to Montgomery)
This nigga woofin'.
JIMMIE
Na bra, swear to god, whole
neighborhood was, like, a ghost
town when he came from New Orleans.
It'd all been Japanese, but-
KOFI
Fillmoe? Psh never, bra.
JIMMIE
Yeah. But they all got rounded up
into War camps. And my grandpa
wasn’t tryna move into someone
else's shit- Not like that. So he
built this.
KOFI
Fuuuuck.
53.
MONTGOMERY
Fuuuuck.
JIMMIE
You still skate?
KOFI
Na.
JIMMIE
Aw, you were raw, bra.
KOFI
Yeah- remember when Rick got caught
stealing from the candy lady?
JIMMIE
Braaaa. He was an ugly crier!
KOFI
Bra, I'm sayin'! And then Ms. Homer
made him shave his head...But her
white ass fucked up his lining. So
his shit was crooked as fuck.
JIMMIE
Lombard-Street-looking-ass...
KOFI
BRUH! Lombard Street thooough-
KOFI
Bra, I can't even...I'm finna piss
myself. Y'all got a bathroom?
JIMMIE
Yeah. Down the hall. The room with
the lil' claw-foot tub.
KOFI
Bet. Man, you niggas made it, man.
That’s crazy.
Jimmie grabs a screw from between his lips and drills it into
a new lock on the front door. He shuts it, proudly locks it
and looks over at Mont, deeply focused on reviving the organ.
JIMMIE
You should uh...you should have a
room, bro.
MONTGOMERY
Aw Jim, that’s okay.
JIMMIE
Nah, seriously. I've been in your
space forever - this spots yours
too, you know.
MONTGOMERY
Any room?
JIMMIE
I mean...sure.
53 INT. "THE HOUSE" PARLOR & DINING ROOM - MORNING - MOMENTS LATER
MONTGOMERY
Is this one okay?
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Yeah...I mean, you sure you want
the dining room?
MONTGOMERY
It's perfect.
55.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Dream big bra, it's yours.
In the next room, Jimmie paces back and forth on the phone.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
No the power’s been on. I just need
the bill in my name - uh huh.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Great, when will I get the first
invoice?...And there's no way you
can mail that sooner?
GRANDPA
(quietly)
He talking about paying some bills?
Mont expertly wraps a cable and packs it, mask still on.
GRANDPA
‘Cause I wouldn't say no if he
offered to chip in a little more.
MONTGOMERY
He already pays half, Grandpa.
GRANDPA
Well he's been here for a while
now. He isn't exactly family.
MONTGOMERY
I think he knows that.
GRANDPA
So what's all this you're up to in
here?
56.
MONTGOMERY
Just packing some things. It's for
a project.
GRANDPA
Since when? We haven't even talked
about the characters yet?
MONTGOMERY
It's a- well I'm still working-
don't quite have a plot yet.
GRANDPA
We could brainstorm a little.
MONTGOMERY
We’re in a bit of a rush, but I’d
love to soon.
GRANDPA
Oh sure. Thats okay, son.
Jimmie enters.
JIMMIE
You about ready bra?
GRANDPA
Well, whatever it is I’m proud of
you.
FRESH
Oooh Monty, that’s hard.
NITTY
Yeah, that’s clean, you should
start rocking that bra-bra.
STUNNA
Hey Monty whats under that coat?
You flashing yo weenie to all the
girls, huh?
57.
JIMMIE
Bro, with that hair, you look like
a Simpson.
STUNNA
Bra you got one shirt! You look
like a fiend!
KOFI
Just like his momma and his
daddy... Yeah I remember.
NITTY
Family of fiends!
KOFI
He probably got lace curtains in
there for they little dollhouse.
KOFI
Swear to god bra, two grown-ass men
playing house! With candles and
shit! I was dying!
GUNNA
(laughing)
Look, this motherfucker so mad!
KOFI
Shoo, bra! Get on! Aye Mont’ teach
him how to vanish!
STUNNA (O.S.)
Kof’ got his balls back!
58.
JIMMIE
You’re really drawing them?...All
they do is talk shit.
MONTGOMERY
You talked shit when I met you.
JIMMIE
No I didn’t.
MONTGOMERY
You did. It’s fine though.
JIMMIE
Well why did you hang out with me
then?
MONTGOMERY
You care about things. I liked you.
JIMMIE
You really don’t give a fuck what
anybody says?
MONTGOMERY
I shouldn’t get to appreciate them
just cuz they’re mean to me? That
seems silly.
JIMMIE
Let’s go out.
57.1 EXT. SPLIT WINDOW - Two young women sit on opposite sides of
a converted bedroom, split down the middle by a hanging bed
sheet. Woman #1's yoga routine is interrupted by a knock at
the door. A man enters her side, tiptoes past her, ducks
under the sheet-wall, and embraces Woman #2.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Bro, that's supposed to be a living
room.
JIMMIE
They would've done the same shit to
our house. Putting 5 people in a
room.
MONTGOMERY
We're quite fortunate.
57.2 EXT. HOUSE PARTY WINDOW - A large Victorian pulses with the
vibrations of music and the energy of millennials. A man
dances in a corner window. His gaze catches Jimmie and
Montgomery ogling from outside. He smiles and waves them in.
The young men tipsily look around, alarmed someone has caught
their peeping. They look back up at the house.
Jimmie finishes his bottle. The duo and walk into towards
camera, until their bodies black out the frame. They step
through the other side, into the world they'd been watching.
JIMMIE
You know the wallpaper on the
outside wall is hella harder to
remove because it’s moist, like
condensation, but then when you
finally do, you see they used WHITE
glue. Like fucking Elmer’s. Like
what was the thought process?
SERENA
Yeah, no idea.
JIMMIE
Yeah. I know. But if you wanted to
have a tour, that would be fun.
SERENA
Sounds good - I’m gonna bring these
drinks. You’re welcome to come -
JIMMIE
Yeah, if that’s cool.
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Sorry I’m talking about this house.
It’s stupid. I’m just kinda excited
about it.
SERENA
She’s this beautiful, vivacious
person dating so many cunty guys.
It’s like, don’t blame the
messenger I’m just trying to help.
JIMMIE
That’s shitty.
SERENA
Yeah it’s hella shitty!
BILLY
But if it’s a self esteem issue,
what really can you do?
SERENA
I mean, I told her. I’m pretty sure
I told her- you can sleep with Sam
if you want.
BILLY
So the thinking is, you have sex
with someone whose not shitty once-
SERENA
Exactly! And then your bar is like
too high for those cunty roadies
and untalented comedian guys.
AURA (O.S.)
You fucking idiots!! Bryan, what
the fuck is wrong with you!!
AURA shoots down the back steps, tipsy and enraged. She
shoves Bryan back as he chuckles.
BRYAN
Aw, babe, sorry, it's good.
AURA
What the fuck, my fucking landlordz
tree, you assholes!?
BRYAN
I’m gonna fix it. I’m gonna fix it.
JIMMIE
Yeah, that's my bad too. I can
help.
BRYAN AURA
Yeah it’ll be fine. What, who are you? I don't even
know you.
(turning to Bryan)
Tonight was MY night. MY-
JIMMIE
Ah- Okay, who are you. I don't even
know you. I'm from here.
AURA
Uh what? Like, how did you even get
here?
JIMMIE
How did YOU get here? The fuck? I'm
born and raised here. I'm third
generation.
BRYAN
Uh, hey bud, uh, we don’t know you.
You know? So, go man, alright?
JIMMIE
Alright bud. But I'm taking the
tree.
63.
AURA
No way asshole! Leave the tree!
JIMMIE
I feel a connection to it.
AURA
Why could you do thaaat?
BRYAN
Babe...babe...it's dead.
Jimmie walks through the kitchen and into the hall, tree in
tow. He reaches the main room to see the party is in full
swing. Mont, bottle in hand, is jamming with the hand-dancer.
JIMMIE
Aye, c'mon Mont.
MONTGOMERY
Dancing.
JIMMIE
Bra, I need help with the tree.
The young men walk home, each carrying sides of the tree.
MONTGOMERY
(loudly)
I mean!
JIMMIE
Bra, shhh.
MONTGOMERY
(loudly whispering)
I hahd ah grreat time. Youuu, you
dodn't dance.
64.
JIMMIE
Shhh, I dance.
MONTGOMERY
Yeaaah you could, but you dodnt-
soo why a tree?
JIMMIE
I dunno bra. To make a point I
guess.
MONTGOMERY
Theres no point! You can’t care SO
MUCH about what they think. Life
isn perzonal.
JIMMIE
Bra, you don’t get it.
MONTGOMERY
GET WHAT!
JIMMIE
Bra! You weren’t raised like... I
raised myself. You had someone to
make you feel good. I had to like
adapt and like win over so many
people cause I was alone. That’s
why I fucking care.
His minds wanders to Serena and he slips his hand under the
sheets. Loud drilling and strange space-jazz burst through
the shaking walls from Montgomery's room. He pulls his hand
out from the sheets and turns to sleep.
JIMMIE
(to himself)
Thick as fuck today.
JIMMIE
We need fertilizer, shit's dying.
Montgomery groans.
JIMMIE
(cautiously)
Hey. What are you doing here?
MARY
What are you ever doing here?
JIMMIE
Uh- didn't you move out though?
MARY
Yeah. They changed the locks on me.
66.
She studies Jimmie’s young face. It’s the first time she’s
really looked at him.
MARY (CONT’D)
What do you want, man?
JIMMIE
I’m sorry. That sucks.
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
How long are you going to be here?
MARY
I don’t know yet. Our flight's
tomorrow so...
JIMMIE
Ok. We'll come back tomorrow then.
Jimmie nods to Montgomery who lifts the bags. Mary eyes their
tools and chuckles to herself.
MARY
Great. That’s nice.
MARY (CONT’D)
In this crazy fucking city, you’re
still here!
The young men sit in the back of the bus, their colorful
flowers beside them.
MONTGOMERY
You think she's gonna stay there
all night?
JIMMIE
Watch bra. We'll come back and
she'll be painting the windowsill.
BRENDA (O.S.)
(into phone)
Vikki, yes I know what time those
meetings start. I’m 23 years clean,
I’m the speaker, okay? I...oh my,
Vikki Imma call you right back-
BRENDA (CONT’D)
Jayboe!- Sir, could you get my
phone?
JIMMIE
Hi mom.
They hug, then sit back down across from each other.
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
I thought you and Ron were in LA.
BRENDA
No, I came back a few months ago.
You know your little brothers been
asking about you.
JIMMIE
Oh, cool - this is my friend, Mont.
BRENDA
Uh huh I’m Jimmie’s mom, oh thank
you.
MONTGOMERY
Pleasure to meet you, ma'am.
JIMMIE
How long are y'all here?
BRENDA
Oh, still seeing.
JIMMIE
Well, we been staying at the house.
You guys could come check it out.
BRENDA
Oh, that's nice.
JIMMIE
I mean the house, my dad’s old
house. We've been fixing it up and
stuff.
BRENDA
Ah, we’d love that. We’d love to
come over, yes.
JIMMIE
Cool.
BRENDA
Well I’ll call you. I got your
number.
JIMMIE
Oh, I don’t have a phone?
BRENDA
Well we’ll just stop by then.
A moment passes.
JIMMIE
Okay well this our stop.
BRENDA
Okay, good to see you son.
BRENDA (CONT’D)
Oh my god, you’re taller than me
now.
The bus doors open. Through the fog, we slowly start to see
two worried pedestrians whisper in hushed tones as they walk
off. Mont and Jimmie look at them concerned.
69.
69.1 At Monts house, candles, flowers, and the Greek Chorus are
gathered, bleary-eyed and dejected on their slab of concrete.
They avoid eye contact with one another, trying to mask their
tears. Their matching necklaces hold freshly laminated photos
of Kofi with the caption "RIP KOFI."
JIMMIE
What the fuck? What happened?
Nobody answers.
JIMMIE
What fucking happened?
GUNNA
They shot bra.
JIMMIE
What? Who?...Who?!
GUNNA
Some niggas, man.
JIMMIE
For what?
GUNNA
He tried to buff em out.
JIMMIE
For what?
STUNNA
What's with all the questions bra?
JIMMIE
I just...I don't get it. We just
seen y'all-
STUNNA
And nigga?
JIMMIE
And I don’t fuckin get it.
STUNNA
Then get on bra.
70.
JIMMIE
No, what the fuck? It’s my friend
too!
Stunna wraps Jimmie into a hug so hard the flower bag falls
out of Jimmie's hand. Jimmie stares off, expressionless.
GRANDPA
That poor boy. And his mother-
A moment passes.
GRANDPA
I'm sorry Jimmie...
GRANDPA
I hope I never made you feel like
you weren't welcome here.
JIMMIE
No, I never felt like that.
GRANDPA
Cause wherever you been, you don’t
have to tell me, but you two just
stick together.
JIMMIE
Of course Mr. Allen.
GRANDPA
'Cause I won't always be here.
MONTGOMERY
Grandpa...
JIMMIE
Mr. Allen, don't worry about us.
71.
GRANDPA
Ok. Alright. I’m fine.
71.1 Montgomery sits in his bed looking out at Nitty stand alone.
Jimmie sits on the floor where his cot once was.
WANDA (V.O.)
We're listening to the sounds of
crickets behind Bill and Sue
Selby's home. Something cozy about
them - let's listen in.
MONTGOMERY
I was writing a play about him, you
know.
JIMMIE
You don’t have to stop now...
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
I know it sounds weird, but I feel
like that coulda been me...if not
for the house.
MONTGOMERY
You a funny motherfucker Jimmie.
JIMMIE
Man. I wanna go home.
72.2 INT. PREACHER'S HOME - In the early hours of the morning, the
Preacher adjusts his bow tie in front of the mirror.
JIMMIE
FUCK!
MONTGOMERY
Oh god.
JIMMIE
How’d she toss all our shit?
MONTGOMERY
I don't think it was her...
JIMMIE
Fucking...Traitor...
He storms over and kicks the sign with all his might.
Pamphlets fly everywhere.
JIMMIE
Okay... Okay...
JIMMIE
Could you stay and watch the shit?
Jimmie sits antsy, wearing the burgundy suit that was clearly
tailored to the larger figure of his grandfather. He taps his
shoes against the cold marble and looks across at a Latino
man in a J.C. Penney suit hammering away at a keyboard.
BANKER (O.S.)
Sorry, how can I help you today?
JIMMIE
I want to buy a house.
BANKER
A house! That's exciting. Are you
working with an agent?
JIMMIE
No, do I need to?
BANKER
No, not necessarily. Do you have a
price range in mind?
JIMMIE
I have a house in mind.
74.
BANKER
Huh, okay. And it's on the market,
I assume? How much are they asking?
JIMMIE
At least 4 million.
BANKER
Ok and how much would you be
willing to put down?
JIMMIE
How much is usual?
BANKER
Well, typically we'd be looking to
secure at least 20%.
JIMMIE
I wouldn't have that.
BANKER
Sure that’s understandable. It’s
going to be hard to land a place
like that but suppose I asked
instead - how much do you make per -
JIMMIE
No no look, I get it. You're gonna
type up all the answers I say and
none of 'em are going to work in my
favor. I'm young, I'm black, I'm
not rich. I came here knowing all
that. But let's be real - you also
got a quota to meet. I'm not
calling you a predator-
BANKER JIMMIE
(interrupting) -but you’re trying to make your
Sir. Thats not how this works- money. So let me help you do
that... Give me whatever deal
you gotta give me. I don't care
what it is. Cuz unlike all the
other people that default, this
is the only house I'll ever
want. So I'll never miss a
monthly bill. Ever-
BANKER JIMMIE
(interrupting) Give me your highest interest
No I understand you feel that rate. Fuck me. You don't even
sir but- have to feel bad. Cuz I'm going
to pay back every single cent.
75.
CLAYTON
OK OK you got me. YOU WIN! You
charming bastard.
CLAYTON
How's it going man?
MONTGOMERY
Fine sir. I noticed the house we'd
discussed is now for sale.
MONTGOMERY
There were some alarming things in
your literature I thought you might
want to know. And certainly the
Bureau of Real Estate would.
CLAYTON
Uh huh...
MONTGOMERY
This says the property has a view
of the Golden Gate? Which I don't
think is true, well it isn't.
MONTGOMERY
It also claims to have all original
"fixtures, floors and faucets".
MONTGOMERY
And are you planning on disclosing
there's no septic Fresh? So any day
now, the garden could be flooded
with...shit.
CLAYTON
Where's this going man?
76.
MONTGOMERY
Well, together this seems like
false advertising, which is grounds
to void a sale. Potentially revoke
a license. Perhaps it isn’t worth
it to you to take this on.
CLAYTON
I thought it might've been you
guys.
MONTGOMERY
Excuse me?
CLAYTON
What's your deal man?
MONTGOMERY
I don’t have a deal.
CLAYTON
Look, someone else on this floor
would've got it if it wasn't
me...at least I’m from here, right?
Montgomery tries his best to stare down Clayton, and hide his
nervous hands under the table.
CLAYTON
I put your stuff on the street. I
could've had it trucked off but I
left it out for you guys.
MONTGOMERY
I'm serious. I will report you.
CLAYTON
For what? Listing a view of the
bridge? And fixtures? I literally
copy pasted that shit. Go ahead.
MONTGOMERY
Well you’re lying about the history
of the house. You're saying here
it's 100 years older than it
actually is.
CLAYTON
No I'm not?
MONTGOMERY
Yes, you are. James Fails built
this house in 1946.
77.
CLAYTON
James who?
CLAYTON
What are you talking about? 1857.
Architect's Gil-hoo-ley- some shit.
CLAYTON
Look, if you need a week to find
somewhere else, then take it. But
don't try to pull some squatters
rights shit on me, man.
CLAYTON
I know your name. I don't want to
call the cops. I don't want to do
that to you.
MONTGOMERY
Where’d you go?
JIMMIE
Doesn't even matter bra. I got
everything inside... except the
couch. Shit fell on me.
MONTGOMERY
Jim, I spoke to the realtor-
JIMMIE
Fuck that guy.
78.
MONTGOMERY
Yeah well he’s gonna keep throwing
us out. And eventually call the
cops.
MONTGOMERY (CONT’D)
I don’t know how much longer we can
keep doing this.
JIMMIE
I understand if you can’t, but I’m
not leaving bro.
MONTGOMERY
Jimmie, he said your-
JIMMIE
Where else am I gonna go? My dads
in an SRO. My aunt’s out in
bumfuck. My mom...I don’t even know
where my mom is. I’m not leaving.
I’m the last one left.
MONTGOMERY
We have my house-
JIMMIE
I can’t go back there bro.
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Bro...don’t cry...this house, this
is what I do. It’s what WE do.
Shit, you said it - who deserves to
be here more than us? Right? This
place is ours. We can’t just give
up now. We gotta fight, right?
JIMMIE (CONT’D)
Right?
MONTGOMERY
Yeah...yeah, you’re right. I’m with
you Jim.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Oh shit. You're writing?!
MONTGOMERY
It's a play. I'd like to put it on
here in a week. If that's alright?
JIMMIE
Fuck yeah. Get it bra!
78 MONTAGE: A CREATION
78.6 EXT. HP BAY - Montgomery shouts lines, leaping from one side
of his boat to the other. He rehearses with himself, as if
playing opposing characters in a scene.
80.
78.7 EXT. “THE HOUSE” SIDE ALLEY - Jimmie looks up from his
gardening to see a pair of drones flying overhead.
JIMMIE
Damn, you wrote all this?
MONTGOMERY
There’s more...but I’d rather you
see that in person.
DING DONG.
JIMMIE (O.S.)
Montgomery?
DING-DONG-DING-DONG!
Jimmie carries us down the stairs towards the front door. The
house looks better than it ever has, in near museum condition.
JAMES SR.
Why you dressed up like a whiteboy?
81.
Jimmie looks down at his regular outfit. James Sr. can see he
caught his son off guard and pivots.
JAMES SR.
Oh, it’s for your little show, huh?
JIMMIE
Uh, yeah.
He looks past Jimmie and makes his way inside for the first
time in years.
JAMES SR.
Man.
JAMES SR.
You mess up my daddy's chair, Mont-
gum-ery?
MONTGOMERY
Oh, no sir. We're, was a...
JAMES SR.
You got stage fright huh?
JAMES SR.
I don't care about the chair, son.
He walks down the hall and sits down at the organ. He yanks a
few knobs and begins playing something resembling Bootsy
Collins’ “I’d Rather Be With You.” He stops and smiles.
JAMES SR.
My daddy hated when I played that
shit.
JAMES SR.
Come on in, don’t be shy. His
grandpa built this. Not bad for a
black man huh?
TIM ELLORY
Oh no, very good, very good.
JIMMIE
I guess you’re not so worried
anymore huh?
JAMES SR.
Na, you still an idiot. But you’re
my idiot-
JAMES SR.
Crazy part is we don’t work here,
this is ours. But we’re hiring
help, applications upstairs, go on
ahead.
JIMMIE
I honestly didn’t think you would
come.
JAMES SR.
Yeah well at my age, a trip like
this-
(he taps his heart)
Figured I should come see how this
was all working out though. I know
you think I be getting mad just to
get mad, but I got my reasons.
A moment passes.
James Sr.’s eyes float to the front hall below. Jimmie turns
to follow his gaze.
Wanda looks up. She sees the men and inhales deeply.
WANDA
Well...the two James'.
JAMES SR.
(lifting himself)
Ahh, Miss Wa-Wa! How you doing
little sis?
WANDA
Fine - you look good James.
JAMES SR.
(laughs)
Oh, you know me.
JIMMIE
What about me?
WANDA
You too, sweetie.
She reaches them and scoops the men into a hug. In his
family’s arms, Jimmie melts.
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
Curtain's up in 10!
Nobody moves.
BOBBY
He cold.
DARKNESS.
85.
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
No words. No words...Please send e-
hugs.
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
Hazel Greene. 135 likes.
MONTGOMERY (O.S.)
Just smoked with you the other day.
Crazy. - John Bishop. 206 likes. 10
shares.
LORETTA
Kofi was a good kid. He used to
walk my niece home when she first
moved out here. He kept his hands
to himself. He was always a little
gentleman. I wish he'd had more
time-
ANDY ROY
Kofi, man? On a board, he was a
natural. A lotta people gotta work
for it but he had it. He’d like
olley the Gonz gap. He’ll be
missed.
87.
TIM ELLORY
Oh I, I never knew him.
GRANDPA
Well, I coached Kofi in Pop Warner.
He'd stay behind to help me pack up
every day, never made a fuss. Only
boy who ever did that.
JIMMIE
My last memory of Kofi is him
talking shit to me. He said some of
most fucked up shit anybody ever
said to me. But Kofi also got
jumped for defending me from older
kids at our group home. He didn’t
like to fight and he fought for me
then. People aren’t one thing.
Nobody answers.
He points at Loretta.
He slams his hands against the walls, cracking the wood. The
whole audience jumps. Jimmie's jaw hardens.
JIMMIE
Bra, what are you doing?
JIMMIE
I don’t need to know, let’s stop.
JIMMIE
Alright bra, enough.
JIMMIE
BRO. STOP-
Silence.
JIMMIE
Yes he did. He built this house.
MONTGOMERY
Jim, he didn’t.
JIMMIE
He fucking did. How you gone tell
me?
MONTGOMERY
I saw the deed.
JIMMIE
You don’t get it...I’m not fucking
great.
JIMMIE
Get outta here Mont.
JIMMIE
I’m not any of those things! Get
out of my house.
Jimmie sits in the bay window watching the crowd spill out
onto the street.
JAMES SR.
What, you in here watching TV?
JAMES SR.
Man, they don't deserve to be in
here anyway.
JIMMIE
Neither do we.
91.
JAMES SR.
You gone really let some ol’ other
ass nigga tell you what’s true?
C’mon Jayboe, get your spine up,
son. Have some pride.
JIMMIE
I been knowing.
(beat)
But you say it.
JAMES SR.
Say what?
JIMMIE
The truth, I been knowing. This
whole time. I’m a liar just like
you. Now you say it.
JAMES SR.
Fuck outta here, man.
JIMMIE
Say it.
After a moment, James Sr. lifts himself and passes his son.
He staggers down the steps, walks towards the front door and
pulls out the cigarette, his hands trembling. He lights it
with the same motion Jimmie does, and opens the door to a
strong wind. He exits.
James Sr. clutches the collar of his coat, bracing for the
wind. Jimmie looks on from the window above.
The last parcel of life has left the house. Its emptiness
heightens its magnificence.
92.
SQUEAK. The gate outside swings shut. Jimmie turns his head.
Jimmie walks down the long hallway, ears piqued - he can hear
footsteps in the brush. He arrives at the back door.
WANDA
This is the sound of my hands
through - well I guess these are
asters now? Used to be tulips.
JIMMIE
(whispering)
Auntie.
JIMMIE
(softly)
I been telling people he built it
so long I almost forgot it wasn’t
true.
93.
WANDA
You were telling your truth Jayboe.
You were just lying to do it.
WANDA (CONT’D)
This was ours. And then it wasn’t.
So you just tell yourself whatever
you need to feel like it still is,
right? We all did that. But you got
a chance to get out from underneath
that now.
JIMMIE
I don’t want to. I just want it.
WANDA
Yeah, I know. I seen your daddy
build his whole life around that,
around some story we got told when
we were kids. Shit, I did too.
Makes you feel good. Feel special.
I don’t think your grandpa even
took it that serious to be honest.
Folks back then didn’t really care
if it was true or not. Just made
them happy to have something to
aspire to.
WANDA (CONT’D)
I’m hella proud of you though - you
almost made it real. All this work
you did. It’s incredible. But you
gotta really ask yourself now if
you want that? Spend your life here
working on this. Fighting for this.
Cause you could make this place
yours, I believe you could. But if
you leave, it's not your loss, it's
San Francisco's. That's how I think
about it anyways. Fuck San
Francisco.
JIMMIE
I love you Auntie, I’m sorry.
94.
WANDA
Well I love you and I’m not. You my
little, bold, bad-ass, beautiful
nephew, man.
They hug.
JIMMIE
Make all that the opening monologue
for your next show.
WANDA
Psh more like the pep talk I need
to keep me going out there in
Antioch.
WANDA (CONT’D)
You're always welcome out there you
know.
BECCA (O.S.)
No - it’s 5 dollars for coffee. Not
some fancy triple foam ice-cream
shit. Coffee. Black.
NINA (O.S.)
It’s absurd.
BECCA
Yeah, but I need it, to wake up, at
5am, to trek, across town, to temp,
with a masters degree. While my mom
pretends NOT to freak out.
NINA
Ugh, can we go back to New York
already?
BECCA
Seriously fuck this city.
JIMMIE
Excuse me-
JIMMIE
You don't get to hate San
Francisco.
NINA
Er, soooorry, who are you?
BECCA
Yeah, thanks dude, I'll hate what I
want.
JIMMIE
Do you love it?
BECCA
I mean, it's- Yeah, I'm here. Do I
have to love it, like...
JIMMIE
You don't get to hate it unless you
love it.
Jimmie rocks with the train. Nina and Becca turn away.
NINA (O.S.)
Classic MUNI shit.
Jimmie walks down the street, holding his broken board like a
wounded warrior returning from battle. He passes the
neighborhood kids playing in a pile of leaves, two women in
scrubs waiting for a bus, the old man in his fez and kimono.
96.
Montgomery steps onto the dock and sees his broken board.
MONTGOMERY (CONT’D)
I’m sorry I did that, Jim. It was a
stupid play.
JIMMIE
No it wasn’t. I’m sorry I didn’t
tell you the truth. I just wanted
it to be true, it felt so good, you
know.
MONTGOMERY
That’s okay-
MONTGOMERY
Jimmie. You hungry?
JIMMIE
Yeah. Starving.
Jimmie and Mont walk towards the house. Mont’s finger through
the gill of a fish he’s caught. None of the Greek Chorus are
around, only burnt candles, empty bottles and dead flowers.
JIMMIE
Why are you in your tightie
whities?
MONTGOMERY
I'm cleaning fish.
Jimmie grabs his cot from under the bed and rolls it out.
Mont whispers goodnight to a drawing of his mom on the wall.
"I'M SORRY I DIDN'T KNOW HOW TO SAY GOODBYE. THANK YOU FOR
BEING MY BEST FRIEND."
97.1 Montgomery stares down at the card and then out the window.
98.1 INT. GROCERY STORE - Montgomery, the last black man in San
Francisco, stands behind the fish counter. He stares, eyes
slightly out of focus, at the rows of dead fish on ice.
98.3 EXT. THE BAY - We glide over deep water and slowly tilt up to
find Jimmie, rowing against the chop like Montgomery's
painting. Freedom, fear, and determination fill his face.
98.5 INT. "THE HOUSE" PARLOR & FRONT HALLWAY - Young couples pass
between rooms, whispering in hushed tones. Montgomery floats
past them like a ghost. The house is staged for purchase: an
Ikea couch, reclaimed wood table, cardboard books and wax fruit.
Montgomery dangles his feet over the edge of the dock. The
faint sounds of sirens blare somewhere far away.
Behind him, a candlelit vigil makes its way past his house
with signs reading RIP KOFI. They cast flickering gold shadows
onto Montgomery's reflection in the water. He stares out at
the Bay as the incoming mist begins to fog his view.
END.