SAMPLE ESSAY:

The maps compare a small island before and after the developments carried out for tourism purposes.
Overall, it is clear that accommodation and other facilities for tourists were built and that a pier was constructed to
permit access to the island by boat.
In the past, the island was originally completely undeveloped with a number of trees occupying the northern and
southern parts. In the central part of the island, two separate accommodation areas were then built, consisting of simple
huts arranged round a circular footpath. A notable transformation was also seen in the erection of a reception area and
restaurant located in the centre of these two areas. Another footpath was constructed, leading to the beach on the western
edge of the island and an area there for tourists to swim.
Access to the island was made possible by the construction of a pier and for tourists to land safely by boat. A vehicle track
then connected the pier with the reception area, which lies in the heart of the island. The vehicle track wound round the
reception area and continued a very short distance to the restaurant.

PRACTICE:
Write the Introduction and the Overview for this map:
The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.
USEFUL STRUCTURES:
INTRODUCTION:
The maps describe a seaside village before and after some developments from 1995 until now.

The maps illustrate the transformation of a seaside village between 1995 and now.

The maps depict how a seaside village changed over the period of 30 years, starting from 1995.

The maps compare the the distinctions between the Spanish city of Castellon in 2000 and the present day.

OVERVIEW:
Overall, it is evident/ it can be clearly seen from the map supplied that …
… the library saw/experienced/witnessed dramatic changes/ significant developments in its layout.
… the city centre saw striking developments.
… the industrial area was totally transformed/ reconstructed/ redeveloped/ rebuilt.

… the central business district was completely modernised during the time period.

… the area witnessed dramatic changes both outdoors and indoors

… the area become less green and more built-up

Overall, it is evident from the map supplied that the city has witnessed significant modernization, with improved
transportation and new commercial facilities. The city center has been transformed into a pedestrian-only zone.

LANGUAGE FOR CHANGES:

Infrastructure:
The school was demolished/ was knocked down/ was flattened/ was pulled down/ was torn down.
The airport disappeared.
There was a destruction of an old hospital.
Appear:
Trees:
More trees were planted.

Infrastructure:
The city hall was built/ was constructed/ was erected/ was put up.
The office was renovated(cải tạo)/ was refurbished(tân trang lại một tòa nhà, nội thất, hoặc cơ sở
vật chất cụ thể (như một trung tâm thương mại, một nhà ga)/
The city centre was transformed/ revamped(tân trang - phù hợp hơn khi nói về thay đổi lớn của
một khu vực đô thị. )
A park appeared.
There was a construction of a new hospital.
The building was modernized with more modern facilities being added.
A new refrigerator(máy lạnh) was installed.
Some new furniture including a bookshelf, a tea table, and a TV were introduced.
Replace:
The shops were demolished/ were knocked down to make way for/ give way to a residential area.
The hotel was replaced by/ made into a school.
The golf course was turned into/ was converted into / transformed into a resort.
The individual houses were developed into a modern residential area.
Change in size:
Expansion:
The car park near the river was extended / was widened/ was enlarged/ was expanded/ was made
bigger.
The hall became bigger.
The railway was lengthened.

Reduction:
The car park near the river became smaller/ shrank.
The main road seemed to narrow (v)/ get narrowed (adj) when it ran towards the northwest.
The community dwindled to tenth of its former size.
The railway was shortened.
Remain:
The airport remains unchanged/ still existed/ experiences no changes.
Remove:
The stadium was removed to/ was relocated to the West area.
LANGUAGE FOR DIRECTIONS:

top left-hand corner at the top top right-hand corner

How to use prepositions correctly:

A is to the west/ to the left-hand side of B.

 “to” is used when A is not a part of B and vice versa.

B is in the west of A.

B is on the left-hand side of A.


“in, on” are use when B in a part of A.
 “in” is used with south, north, east, west
“on” is used with left-hand side, right-hand side
Other ways to describe direction:
The maps compare the Spanish city of Castellon in 2000 and the present day, highlighting notable developments in
infrastructure and public services.

Overall, it is evident from the map supplied that the city has witnessed significant modernization, with improved
transportation and new commercial facilities. The city center has been transformed into a pedestrian-only zone.

In 2000, the city contained a train station, a university, a traditional market, and a central business district. However,
several new structures have been added over time. The train station has been relocated and upgraded, and a tramline has
been constructed to improve connectivity. Near the university, a hall of residence and a police station have been built.
Additionally, the old market has been replaced with a covered market, and a shopping center has been introduced.

The port area has also undergone major changes. Previously accessible to vehicles, it is now designated for pedestrians
only. Furthermore, entertainment options such as bars and clubs have been developed along the waterfront. The city center
has implemented a bike rental scheme, providing a more sustainable transportation alternative.

PRACTICE
Write 2 bodies for this map using given vocabulary and structures:

USEFUL STRUCTURES FOR BODY PARAGRAPH:

- One notable change is (that)…

- Use relative clause (e.g.: The playground, which is in the middle of the park, has been downsized.)
 Some phrases for future map:
It is projected/ expected that + clause.
S + be projected/ expected/ planned to + Vinf.
The projection/ expectation is that + clause.
S + be going to/ will…

MORE PRACTICE:
The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.