A Simple Plan 1998
A Simple Plan 1998
A SIMPLE PLAN
A Screenplay
By
Scott B. Smith
FADE IN on:
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BEGIN CREDITS
I INT. FEED MILL - DAY I
A tiny office, which Hank shares with his boss, TOM BUTLER. The
bookshelves are crowded with files; the desks are messy; a
fluorescent light flickers on the ceiling. Butler, a heavyset
man approaching forty, is talking on the phone: no words, just
an intermittent string of BMMM's, UH-HUH's, and UNH-UNH's.
Hank enters, plucks the top sheet of paper from his clipboard,
deposits it on Butler's desk. Butler scans its columns without
pausing in his conversation. As Hank sits down at his own,
slightly smaller desk, his watch BEEPS. He fumbles with it,
checking the time: it• s noon.
Hank hurriedly shuts his briefcase, turns off his desk lamp.
When he steps to the door and pulls down his coat, Butler
glances at his own watch, raising his eyebrows, the phone still
pressed to his ear. Hank hesitates, halfway into his overcoat.
HANK
The cemetery •• ?
(Butler's face remains blank)
My brother and 1 •••
Butler nods, suddenly remembering, and waves Hank away. Hank
rushes out the door. It SLAMS shut, then immediately pops back
open as Hank sticks his head in.
HANK (cont'd)
Happy New Year!
(CONTINUED)
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3 CONTINUED: 3
Before Butler can respond, the door shuts, and Hank is gone.
4 EXT. SMALL TOWN MAIN ST. - DAY 4
Hank pauses inside the door, unbuttoning his coat. To his right
is the dining room, to his left the living room. Nothing•s
expensive, but all the furnishings have obviously been chosen
with care. A poinsettia sits on a table by the front door.
Bank drapes his coat over the bannister, bends to remove his
shoes, then stops, listening. WE HEAR water running, and--too
faintly to make out the words--a woman singing. Hank yanks off
his shoes, starts quickly up the stairs.
7 INT. MITCHELL BEDROOM - DAY 7
(CONTINUED)
9 CONTINUED: 9
SARAH
Oh-oh. Looks like it's going to be a long
afternoon for you.
(grinning from the window)
Be brought Lou along.
Bank turns from the mirror in dismay, his shoulders sagging.
18 INT. MITCHELL FRONT ENTRANCEWAY - DAY 18
(CONTINUED)
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11 CONTINUED: 11
BACK TO SCENE
Jacob laughs. He starts toward the lot, unzipping his own fly.
Hank remains crouched there, watching as the two men, giggling
like boys, pee their names in the snow. The dog jumps from the
truck to sniff at their urine.
• 11 A EXT. PEDERSON BARNYARD - DAY *lift
The explosive sound of FLAPPING WINGS. WE SEE a chicken coop,
surrounded by a wooden fence. The chickens are scrambling, a
FOX in their midst. The fox lunges, catches one of the birds,
snaps its neck with one quick shake of the head, then darts
away, scampering over the wooden fence. The windows of the
Pederson house are blank; no one's home.
WE RISE into the air, watching the fox set off into the fields,
its paws throwing up a wake of snow. on the horizon, WE SEE a
dark mass of trees. The fox is heading straight for them.
• 11 B EXT. COUNTRY CEMETERY - DAY *118
Jacob's truck is pulling away from the parking lot, the dog in
back. WE SEE the two men's names yellowing the snow. Lou's is
written in large, bold letters.· Jacob's starts out equally big,
but then gradually shrinks as his bladder empties: JAcob.
( •11C EXT. JACOB'S TRUCK - DAY - MOVING/BRIDGE & CREEK *I IC
Jacob drives with his gut pressed against the wheel. Like Lou,
he has a beer can nestled between his thighs. Lou is on the
outside, with Hank in the middle. Lou and Jacob talk back and
forth above Hank's head, as if he weren't even there.
LOU
And when he looks under the seat, he
shouts: NWhat the hell is this supposed to
be?" And you know what the guy says?
JACOB
{snickering)
It's a crockpot~
Lou shakes his head, LAUGHING.
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LOU
No, no--come on, pay attention. That was
the preacher. This is the cowboy.
Jacob thinks for a moment, then grins slyly.
JACOB
He says, #Moooo."
They both LAUGH. Hank glances from one to the other, mystified.
LOU
No. He says, uWhy, officer. It's just a
piiiiiineapple."
They LAUGH even harder: Lou prods Hank with his elbow.
LOU (cont'd)
Get it?
Hank shakes his head. Lou turns to Jacob.
LOU (cont'd)
Mr. Accountant doesn't get it.
Jacob starts to respond, but then a startled, panicky expression
sweeps across his face. He slams the brakes.
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•13 OMI'l' •13
The dog leaps down, BARKING, and chases the fox into the woods.
7A.
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LOU
Looks like Dwight Pederson's missing a
chicken.
( Jacob WHISTLES again. The BARKING sounds very far away now, but
it seems to have stopped moving. The three men listen.
JACOB
She treed it.
LOU
That's how it sounds.
Jacob walks to the truck and reaches inside, rummaging behind
the front seat. Be emerges with a hunting rifle in his hand.
HANK
What're you doing?
Jacob doesn't answer. Be loads a bullet into the gun, slams the
truck's door, shoulders the rifle.
BANK (cont'd)
It's a nature preserve, Jacob.
JACOB
So?.
BANK
It's posted land. You can't hunt here.
Lou grins, watching the brothers. Jacob points at his truck.
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JACOB
He busted my headlight.
LOU
We"re not really hunting here, Hank. It's
more like we're collecting a debt.
Jacob and Lou set off into the woods, LAUGHING. It's clear that
they"re a bit loaded. Hank hesitates, then hurries after them.
18 EXT. WOODS - DAY 18
A small stream. WE SEE the dog and fox• s tracks running up the
far bank. Lou has already crossed; Jacob is sloshing through.
Hank, in dress shoes, searches for a dry passage. Lou and Jacob
LAUGH as they watch him teeter his way across on some stones.
19 EXT. WOODS - FURTHER IN - DAY 19
Lou and Hank stop to rest on the edge of a small valley. Jacob
has fallen behind. He struggles toward them, his jacket open,
his face shiny with sweat. Lou points into the valley.
LOU
Jesus. Look at all those birds.
HANK'S POV - DOWN THE SLOPE
The trees are different here, smaller, planted in rows, the
remains of an apple orchard. Their branches are full of crows.
The fox's tracks go straight through the orchard, disappearing
over the far slope. In the distance, the dog continues to BARK.
JACOB (OS)
wish we'd brought something to drink.
BACK TO SCENE
Jacob has reached them, GASPING, soaked with sweat. Lou waves
his hand in the air, _snaps his fingers over his jacket pocket,
pulls out a can of beer. He opens it, hands it to Jacob.
LOU
Always be prepared.
Jacob takes two large gulps, returns the can to Lou. Lou sips
at it, then holds it out to Hank, but Hank shakes his head.
LOU (cont'd) .
what? can't drink till after five?
Hank SIGHS, peers off into the orchard, pointedly ignoring Lou.
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LOU (cont'd)
(trying to get a rise)
or maybe you don't wanna share? 'Fraid
you'll catch something from us.
He winks at Jacob, who smirks. When Bank still refuses to
react, Lou hands the beer can to Jacob, scoops up a snowball.
Be feints a throw at Bank, and Hank ducks. Lou and Jacob LAUGH.
LOU
See, now that's what you might call in-sin-
u-a-ting a throw. Remember? You said that
last time I saw you. Could've just said
"hint," but nooo, you had to put on airs,
show us all the fancy words you know.
Lou tosses the snowball into the orchard.
BANK'S POV - THE ORCHARD
The snowball arcs into the orchard, smacks into a mound of snow
upon which a dozen crows are perched. CAWING, the crows rise
up, and a sheet of snow slides off the mound, partially
REVEALING a SINGLE ENGINE PLANE~ Both its wings are missing.
It's balanced, nose-down, over the trunk of a fallen tree.
BACK TO SCENE
The three men stare into the orchard, stunned.
BANK
Jesus Christ.
28 INT. PLANE - DAY 28
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21 EXT. ORCHARD - DAY 21
Bank pulls his head from the doorway. Jacob has his rifle
cradled in his arms~ Lou is drinking from his can of beer.
HANK
I can't see.
' (to Jacob)
can you scrape some of that snow off the
windshield?
Jacob shuffles off, while Bank tugs again at the door. Be pulls
so hard that he rocks the plane, dislodging the remainder of its
shell of snow, but the door refuses to budge any further.
Bank turns sideways, pushes his head and shoulders through the
doorway, then gets stuck. Be tries to pull back, but his coat
is snagged. WE HEAR a tearing sound.
BANK (cont'd)
Shit.
22 IN'l'. PLANE - DAY 22
( Bank is trying to worm his way in, when WE HEAR Jacob start to
scrape at the windshield. Bank squints toward the cockpit.
22A*
BANK'S POV - PLANE'S COCKPIT 22A*
Jacob continues to scrape at the windshield, but to no effect.
Through the gray opacity of the ice, WE SEE the shadow of his
arm moving back and forth. It disappears, then comes 'l'BUMPING
down against the glass. The ice shatters, falls away. Light
floods in, REVEALING a man's body, slumped in the lefthand seat.
The pilot's head, resting against the dashboard, seems to be
shaking back and forth.
22B* BACK TO SCENE 22B*
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Jacob shuffles back toward Lou from the front of the plane.
JACOB
What'd he say?
Lou shrugs: he neither knows nor cares. Be finishes his beer,
tosses the can off into the trees, then steps behind Hank.
LOU
Watch this.
He begins to tickle Hank. Bank kicks out, but misses and loses
his footing. The doorway's grip holds him up. Lou LAUGHS.
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24 INT. PLANE 24
Hank strains to get free. Lou and Jacob's LAUGHTER filters in.
JACOB (OS)
Let me try.
Bank freezes as WE HEAR a loud flapping sound from the cockpit.
24A* HANK'S POV - . THE COCKPIT 24A*
The pilot's head is tossed aside as two crows burst from his
lap, THUDDING into the windshield. They beat against the glass,
then bounce off, one landing on the rear of the pilot's seat,
the other on the seat beside it. Their heads dart back and
forth, eyeing Bank.
24B* BIRD'S POV - HANK TRAPPED IN THE DOORWAY 24B*
Hank, very carefully, is trying to slip back out the door.
24C* Err. ORCBAIW
Jacob begins to tickle Bank. WE BEAR Bank scream.
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The birds emerge from the hole. Lou flinches at the sight of
them, stumbling backward, falling onto his rear end in the snow.
26 INT. PLANE .26
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Jacob fills the doorway, blocking the light.
JACOB
You see those birds?
Hank doesn't answer. Bis forehead is bleeding. Be stands up,
moves hurriedly toward the cockpit.
JACOB (cont'd)
Bank?
HANK'S POV - TBE PILOT
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LOU (OS)
What the fuck's he doing in there?
Hank picks up the can, throws it away in disgust. It hits the
floor, RATTLES right back into him. Be peers down at it for a
beat, then touches his forehead, examines the blood on his
fingers. Finally, he rises, struggles toward the door, shoving
the duffel bag out before him.
27 EXT. ORCHARD - MOMENTS LATER 27
Hank crouches beside the plane, holding snow to his wound. Lou
removes his gloves, starts to work at the duffel bag's knot.
JACOB
I say we just stop by the police station.
If we call it in on the CB, we'll never get
out of here. We'll have to wait forever--
Lou has managed to open the bag; WE SEE him look inside with an
expression of stunned amazement. He reaches in, touches
whatever•s there. Neither Hank nor Jacob notices his reaction.
HANK
( We'll still have to come back, Jacob.
We'll have to lead them to the--
LOU
Jacobi
(Jacob turns)
Look •••
He tilts the bag. It's filled with hundred dollar bills,
packets held together with paper bands. The three men stand in
shocked silence, not even noticing when the dog reappears,
wading down through the snow on the opposite slope. Finally,
Lou starts to GIGGLE. He bends his head into the bag, kisses
the money, then looks up at the other two, ecstatic.
LOU (cont'd)
Can you believe this?
Hank steps forward to look more closely. Jacob glances from him
to LOU, bewildered. •
JACOB
It's real?
LOU
Of course it's real. Don't be stupid.
He plucks out a packet, tosses it to Jacob. Jacob catches it,
staring in wonder. Lou jumps up, pumped with excitement.
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27 CONTINUED: ( 4) 27
RANK (cont'd)
No promises. If it looks like anyone's
searching for the money, I'll burn it, and
that'll be that.
Jacob and Lou stare at each other, silently debating. Finally,
Jacob shrugs, tossing his packet back into the bag.
LOU
(threatening)
we count it first.
Hank and Lou lock eyes for a moment. Then Hank nods.
RANK
That's probably a good idea.
28 EXT. EDGE OF ROAD - DUSK ZB
Hank throws the duffel bag over the money. It barely covers
half of it. He waves Jacob and Lou toward the cab.
HANK
Get in the truck, okay? I'll handle this.
(CONTINUED)
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Jacob and Lou hesitate, then move quickly toward the front.
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HANK
Him too.
CARL
That's a shame, ain't it? Two grown men,
both eager for work. This country •••
Carl leans forward, turns up his truck's heater.
HANK
Well, we should probably--
The door to Jacob's truck CREAKS open, and car1 looks up.
RANK'S POV - ACROSS THE ROAD
For an instant WE SEE the plane"s pilot approaching, his eyeless
face, his bloated hands held out before him, but then WE HEAR:
CARL (OS)
Hello, Jacob.
And the figure becomes Jacob approaching us, the door of his
truck standing open behind him.·
( BACK TO SCENE
CARL (cont'd)
I was beginning to think maybe you were
trying to avoid me.
JACOB
I was just cold. Wanted to get in the
truck and warm up a bit.
(glancing at Bank, grinning)
You tell him about the plane?
Bank stares at his brother, speechless with surprise and horror.
38 INT. JACOB'S TRUCK -. NIGHT - MOVING 38
Hank sits between Jacob and Lou, his legs hugging the duffel
bag. Be keeps glancing out the torn rear window, making sure
they aren't being pursued.
HANK
(scared and angry)
I've seen you do a lot of stupid things,
Jacob, but that pretty much takes the cake.
Before Jacob can respond, Lou jwnps to his defense.
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LOU
It was my idea.
HANK
Well, that's brilliant, Lou. _If they find
the plane now, and they realize the money's
gone, he's gonna know right off who took
it.
Jacob shakes his head, grinning.
! JACOB
That's the beauty of it. There's no way
we'd have mentioned it if we were the ones
who took the 1110ney.
LOU
It's not like we told him you actually saw
a plane going down. Just that you thought
you heard one with engine trouble. I don't
really think--
HANK
(furious)
You want me to burn the money?
The other two men are mute, intimidated bY his rage.
HANK (cont'd)
I'm~ going to jail for this, Lau. If it
looks like there's even the slightest
chance of us getting caught, I swear to
God, it's all gonna vanish. You
understand?
Again, silence. The torn plastic makes a flapping sound behind
their heads. Finally, Lou throws Jacob a little smirk.
LOU
(whispering)
It's a piiiiiiineapple.
He and Jacob begin to GIGGLE. Hank glances from one to the
other, still angry, and--with no small effort--they manage to
stop laughing.
Out the window WE SEE a rundown farmhouse. Jacob slows the
truck, pulls into the driveway.
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NANCY
Lou?
(she steps outside)
Where the hell've you been?
BACK TO SCENE
Lou starts toward the house, making calming gestures with his
hands. Nancy throws another snowball at him, narrowly missing.
LOU
Come on, Honey. we just got a little tied
up.
(CONTINUED)
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HANK
Sarah.
(she stops, looking at him)
• What if you were out walking in the woods,
and you found a bag full of money--maybe, I
don't know •••
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(he pretends to think)
I Four million dollars. Would you keep it?
Sarah gives him a funny look, half-smiling, half-wary.
SARAH
Of course not.
The pot begins to boil over on the stove. Sarah jumps to turn
it down. Hank stares after her, astonished.
HANK
How come?
Sarah resumes her stirring.
SARAH
Well, for starters, it'd be stealing.
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'
Sarah stirs the pot, considering this. It's clear that she's
searching for a reason not to take a drug dealer's money.
SARAH
This is so silly, Hank.
Hank gives her a long look of disappointment, which she doesn't
seem to notice. Then he turns and strides from the room. Sarah
continues to stir, oblivious of his departure.
SARAH (cont'd)
(to the empty room)
I mean, it doesn't matter where it's from.
I wouldn't take it.
(a pause)
It's just wrong. That's all that--
Hank returns, dragging the duffel bag. Be pours the money into
a massive pile across the table; packets sliding off and.
dropping to the floor. Then he turns to Sarah, a huge grin on
( his face. She's staring open-mouthed at the money.
HANK
It's real.
Sarah looks almost pained. She reaches behind herself, drops
the spoon onto the stove, touches her hand to her forehead.
•33R BANK AND SARAH - LATER •33R
Hank is washing the dishes, while Sarah dries them and puts them
away. The money is still lying on the floor, but it's been
organized into stacks now. A TV is playing on the counter.
HANK (cont'd)
That's what makes it a crime, isn't it?
People getting hurt?
He turns off the water. Sarah begins to dry the last pot.
SARAH
(impatient)
What makes it a crime is that it's against
the law. It doesn't matter whether anybody
gets hurt or not. You get caught and you
go to jail.
HANK
But you aren't listening to me. The
money's the only evidence that we•ve done
anything wrong. We can _sit on it and see
what happens-
( A COMMERCIAL is playing on the TV, and both it and Hank's
dialogue roll over into the next scene.
•33C INT. HANK'S FAMILY ROOM - LATER •33C
Hank and Sarah sit on the couch in front of· a larger TV.
They're sipping sparkling cider. The money is back in its bag,
which sits across the room now, leaning up against the doorway.
HANK (cont'd)
--if someone comes searching for it, we'll
burn it, and that'll be that. There's no
risk, we'll always be in complete control.
on TV, the commercial- ends, and a New Year's Eve show comes on--
there are shots of Times Square, frenzied crowds, the gold ball.
SARAH
What about Jacob and Lou?
HANK
As long as we"re the ones holding the
money, they'll do whatever we tell them to.
On the TV, the countdown is just starting1 the ball begins its
descent. Hank and Sarah don't seem to notice.
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SARAH
And your tracks in the snow? They lead in
from the road, right to the plane, then
back out again.
HANK
It's supposed to snow tomorrow. The
tracks'll be gone by tomorrow night.
The New Year arrives--FIRECRACKERS, COWBELLS. on the 'Na swing
band strikes up AULD LANG SYNE. Sarah lifts her glass, and Hank
returns the gesture, but distractedly, merely out of reflex.
HANK
we can always burn the money. Right up to
the very last moment. It seems silly to
just give it up now, before anything•s even
gone wrong.
•330 BENEATH THE BED - LATER •330
Sarah is crouched over HankJ his hands are on her breasts. They
both seem to be deeply involved in what they're doing, but then,
suddenly, Sarah freezes.
SARAH
You have to go back and return some of it.
A lot, like five hundred thousand.
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37 OMIT
Hank's car, a green station wagon, pulls over near where they
crashed the day before. Hank and Jacob push open their doors,
Jacob's dog bounding out behind them. Hank moves to the car's
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He turns back to the jack, starts to rotate its handle. The car
begins to rise. Jacob gestures at the tire.
JACOB
Nobody"s gonna believe that. It's obvious
it's not flat.
Hank reaches for the tire"s valve. The air HISSES out.
39 INT. PLANE - DAY 39
As Hank starts forward, the plane tilts onto its nose again.
The soda can RATTLES past Hank to the cockpitf the pilot swivels
19C* lll his chair, his head smacking into the contfOI panel. i1ie .39C*
icicle falls to the floor, shattering.
39D* Bank drags a trash bag out of the pouch, shoves it beneath the .39D*
pilot's seat.
48 EXT. EDGE OF ROAD - DAY 48
Jacob is crouched beside the car. He's changed the tire and
lowered the jack, and is just tightening the bolts on the spare.
WE HEAR an engine, gradually growing louder. The dog WHIMPERS,
peering toward the field. Jacob turns to look.
JACOB'S POV - ACROSS THE ROAD
DWIGHT PEDERSON, an old man in an orange jacket, is approaching
on a snowmobile. He's following the fox's tracks, a rifle on
his shoulder.
41 EXT. ORCHARD - DAY 41
Hank squeezes out of the plane, then starts to shut the door,
only to discover--
HANK'S POV - THE AIRPLANE'S DOOR
A small square of tan cloth hangs from one of the door's bolts.
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BACK TO SCENE
Jacob rises to his feet, still gripping the jack's handle. The
snowmobile is almost to the road. Pederson waves at Jacob, and
Jacob waves back, glancing anxiously into the woods.
43 EXT. THE ORCHARD - DAY 43
About thirty yards ahead, WE SEE Jacob standing behind the car,
talking with Pederson, who's still perched on his snowmobile.
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Hank yanks off his glove, holds his hand over Pederson•s mouth.
Jacob's trying to stop crying.
JACOB (cont'd)
But he wouldn"t listen--
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HANK
(horrified)
You killed him.
JACOB
What?
HANK
(rising)
He's dead.
Jacob moves quickly toward the old man.
JACOB
He can't be. All I did was--
(a beat~ with sudden panic)
Check again.
Hank ignores him. He steps out into the road, glancing in both
directions. Jacob crouches beside Pederson, jostles him. He
turns to Hank, his words emerging quick and scared.
JACOB (cont'd)
You gotta do CPR. Don't· you know CPR?
Hank doesn't respond. He's peering off toward Pederson's farm.
Jacob starts to push at Pederson's chest. It's clear he has no
idea what he• s doing: he slams his hands down with far too much
force, totally out of control. Hank turns to watch.
HANK
Jacob.
Jacob keeps pushing, too fast, too hard. Hank strides over.
HANK (cont'd)
Goddammit!
He shoves Jacob away. Jacob immediately starts scrambling back
toward Pederson, crying, but Hank blocks his way.
JACOB
we gotta save him. They'll--
Hank crouches before Jacob, grabbing at him, intense.
HANK
Stop it. All right? I can't think.
Jacob falls silent. He continues to CRY, though, his eyes on
Pederson. Hank paces off a few steps, glances up and down the
road again. Then he steps back toward Jacob, urgent now.
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HANK (cont'd)
Have any cars gone by?
JACOB
Cars?
HANK
While I was in the woods. Have any passed?
Jacob shakes his head, wipes at his face.
JACOB
Why?
Hank stares down at Pederson, thinking hard. He glances up and
down the road one last time, then takes a deep breath, gathering
himself, and starts to lift Pederson back onto the snowmobile.
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I HANK
Grab his legs. We'll make it look like an
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accident.
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Jacob jumps to his feet, shaking his head, pointing at the snow.
JACOB
They'll follow the tracks, Hank. They'll
come here and they'll see our tracks and
they'll follow them to the plane
HANK
(shaking his head)
It's supposed to storm. Any minute now
it'll start snowing, and all of this'll be
covered up.
Jacob frowns, looking at the sky, which is continuing to clear.
He starts to protest, but Hank doesn't let him. He drops
Pederson, takes Jacob by the arm, guides him toward the car.
HANK (cont'd)
You're gonna drive back to the bridge.
I'll take him through the park on the
snowmobile. We'll push him into the creek,
make it.look like he drove off by accident.
JACOB
The bridge?
HANK
You'll get there before me, but I don't
want you to stop. I want you to drive by,
then circle back. I don't want people to
see you sitting there.
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Hank thrusts the car keys into Jacob's hand, pulls open the car
door, shoves Jacob inside. Jacob drops into the seat. For an
instant it seems as if he's about to cry again. Hank leans
close, forces hilll to look hilll in the face.
HANK (cont'd)
Just trust me, okay? I'll get us through
this.
Jacob stares at hilll, silent, but the threat of tears has passed.
After a beat, Hank steps back, SLAMS shut the door. He waits
till Jacob STARTS the car, then moves quickly back toward
Pederson. As Jacob turns the car around, Hank struggles with
the old man's body, dragging him up onto the snowmobile.
Hank slings Pederson's rifle over his shoulder, climbs onto the
rear of the snowmobile, starts the ENGINE. He has to press
against Pederson's back to reach the controls. Jacob drives
away.
CLOSE on Pederson's right hand, as the fingers clench slightly.
When the snowmobile starts forward, Pederson•s eyes flash open.
He looks glassily out at the world, then GROANS, jerking.his
head. Hank flinches, tumbling off the snowmobile, which·
( continues on its own for a few yards before veering to a stop at
the edge of .the woods. Pederson rolls off into the snow.
Hank stares in shock. Finally, he manages to rise and
hesitantly approach the old man. He crouches beside him.
HANK
Dwight •• ?
Pederson rocks his head, kicks his leg. He MOANS.
PEDERSON
Your brother ••• he ••• hit me •••
Hank jumps up, rushes out into the center of the road.
HANK
<_yelling)
Jacobi
HANK'S POV - DOWN THE ROAD
The car is already too far away to call back.
BACK TO SCENE
Hank watches for a moment, his arm raised, his mouth open. Then
he turns back to Pederson, who's stopped moving. Hank starts
(CONTINUED)
36.
47 CONTINUED: ( 4) 47
toward him. As he nears the old man, his foot hits something in
the snow, and he stops to look: it's the jack's handle. Hank
stoops to pick it up, glancing back toward the road, where WE
SEE the jack itself still sitting on the pavement.
HANK (cont'd)
Shit.
He jogs over, picks up the jack, returns to Pederson, crouches
over him. Pederson blinks up at him, his face smeared with
blood. He gestures toward his farm.
PEDERSON
Get ••• Alice •••
He GROANS, shuts his eyes. Hank is clutching the jack in his
arms. He stares down at Pederson, then across the road toward
the farm, then back at the old man, thinking hard. Pederson
opens his eyes, peers up at Hank, as if surprised to find him
_ still crouched there.
PEDERSON (cont'd)
Hank •• ?
They hold eyes for a moment. ·Then Hank lowers the jack into the
snow. A sudden look of fear passes over Pederson's face. He
struggles up onto his elbows, turns toward his home. WE SEE his
house, tiny and dark against the horizon. Pederson YELLS.
PEDERSON (cont'd)
Alice!
Hank pushes him back down, ducking low.
HANK
Shhh.
Jacob drives up in Hank's car. As Hank throws the jack into the
car's rear, Jacob jumps out and rushes toward the bridge's
railing, leaving the engine on. Hank stares at him, shocked.
t HANK
Jacob.
Jacob ignores him. He's stopped crying, but his movements are
still jittery, panicky. He peers over the railing at Pederson.
HANK (cont'd)
(urgent)
If someone sees us--
r
I JACOB
I'm not gonna do it.
HANK
(CONTINUED)
38.
52 CONTINUED: 52
their boots. Jacob throws his brother up onto the car's hood,
pinning him there. He leans down, SHOUTS into Hank's face.
JACOB
This is my decision! Mine!
He lifts Hank off the hood, SLAMS him back down, banging his
head. Then he turns, starts back toward the edge of bridge.
JACOB (cont'd)
I'm the one who killed him. I'm the one
they"re gonna--
HANK
You didn't kill him.
Jacob turns to look at him. Hank sits up, rubbing his head,
wincing. He remains silent, hoping Jacob will let the statement
go, but Jacob doesn't. He stands there, waiting.
HANK (cont'd)
(hedging)
We both did.
JACOB
What do you mean?
Hank slides down off the hood, starts toward the driver's side
door. He obviously doesn't want to say anything more.
HANK
can•t we just get out of here, Jacob? If
somebody sees us •••
Jacob doesn •t move. Hank glances up and down the road, then
SIGHS, rubs at his face.
HANK (cont'd)
He was still alive when you left. I
smothered him with his scarf.
Jacob struggles to absorb this. Hank moves to the driver's side
door, turns back to his brother. The dog pushes past him,
jumping into the car.
HANK (cont'd)
I guess that makes it my decision, doesn't
it?
•SZR CU TELEVISION SCREEN •SZR
(CONTINUED)
39.
*52A CONTINUED: *52A
Hank and Sarah stand before the 'N. Sarah• s flicking the
remote: tense, frightened, focused. Hank's not looking at the
screen--he's watching Sarah, struggling to reassure her.
HANK
I swear to God, it looks real ••• And even
if ••• well, let's say it doesn't look like
an accident. Who'd ever •• ? I mean, why
would anyone think of us? We don't--
SARAH
(sharp, cutting h.iJII off)
Your tracks lead right to the plane.
HANK
But it's gonna snow. Any moment now--
SARAH
was there any. blood?
HANK
Blood?
Sarah turns on him, furious, still flicking the channels.
SARAH
Jacob hit him. Did he bleed anywhere? on
the road, or the-
HANK
I don't know. I can't re--
SARAH
(appalled)
YOU didn't look?
HANK
(struggling to remember)
I didn't ••• I was ••• I mean, it's gonna
snow, Sarah. As soon as it snows all
that'll be cov--
Sarah waves abruptly him into silence. She's found the news.
53U ON THE 'N 53U
(CONTINUED)
40.
SJV CONTINUED: 53V
FEMALE REPORTER
He was apparently trying to cross along
this bank of snow, when his snowmobile
slipped over the edge, throwing him into
the icy waters of Anders' Creek.
WE SEE the ice, the half-submerged snowmobile. Pederson's hat
floats beside it, but his body has been removed. Carl crouches
on the river"s bank, staring up toward the guardrail.
53UA WE SEE 53UA
Sarah turns from the TV, sits on the couch. She"s started to
regain control of herself, is struggling now to search out all
the loose ends. Hank drops down beside her. He takes her hand,
and she lets it hang there in his grip, absolutely lifeless,
like a napkin. ·
SARAH
fstaring into the distance)
I wish you hadn"t told Jacob.
(a pause)
I wish he still thought he was the one who
killed him.
Hank waits, as if expecting something more, but nothing comes.
He drops her hand.
(CONTINUED)
40A.
54 CONTINUED: 54
HANK
Does it scare you?
(CONTINUED)
41.
54 CONTINUED: ( 2) 54
SARAH
Of course it scares me. What if he tells
someone?
HANK
I mean what I've done.
Sarah hesitates before she answers, as if debating the right
course to take. Finally, she shakes her head.
SARAH
I know you only did it because you felt
trapped. Because you couldn't think of
another way.
Hank considers this for a beat. It's obviously not the answer
he was hoping for.
HANK
But would you've done the same thing? If
you'd been there instead of me?
Sarah stares at hiln; she doesn"t know what to say.
HANK (cont'd)
I just want to know if it's possible.
SARAH
Oh, Sweetie.
She leans forward to hug hiln. He hesitates, then hugs her back.
But just as he's beginning to relax into her embrace--shutting
his eyes, burrowing into her neck--she abruptly pulls away,
staring at the TV.
S4U SARAH'S POV ·• ON THE TV - THE NEWSROOM S4U
WE SEE the spot where the fox crossed the road. There are
tracks everywhere, a gash in the snow alongside the road from
Jacob's truck, and tread marks from Pederson's snowmobile •••
•54C EXT. WOODS - THE STREAM •54C
Tracks run up and down either bank--Hank, Jacob, and Lou's, the
fox's and the dog's •••
*54D EXT. ORCHARD - THE PLANE •54D
The plane shines silver in the sunlight, surrounded by its own
tangle of tracks.
•54E INT. MITCHELL FAMILY ROOM - DUSK
Hank and Sarah continue to hold each other"s eyes for several
beats of anxious silence.
•55 OMIT •55
0 56 OMIT •56
No sign of snow.
59 EXT. ORCHARD - NIGHT 59
(
43.
Hank turns from the window, heads back toward the kitchen. He
pauses at the doorway to the family room, glancing in.
•680 INT. HANK'S FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT •680
•63 OMIT
43A.
A snowball THUMPS into the glass. Snow is pouring from the sky.
Hank stands in the street, dressed in his pajamas, LAUGHING. He
tosses another snowball, then waves for her to come out.
648 BACK TO SCENE 648
The plane is once again buried beneath the snow. The tracks
have vanished. The crows perch motionless in their trees. we
watch the snow continue to fall: fat, heavy flakes. Then--
DISSOLVE TO:
658 SMALL TOWN MAIN ST. - FROM HANK'S OFFICE WINDOW - DAY 658
(CONTINUED)
REVISED 1/19/98 GREEN 46.
65B CONTINUED: (2) 65B
Jacob eyes Hank for a beat, then moves to the edge of the porch.
He peers off toward the windmill. When he speaks, his voice has
a childish inflection, lost and scared.
JACOB
You want me to just drive off all alone?
Hank doesn't know how to answer this. He rubs tiredly at his
face, steps up onto the porch beside his brother, turns to stare
off across the fields.
HANK
Where would you say you got your money?
Jacob brightens; he's obviously already thought this through.
JACOB
we could tell people Sarah inherited some.
Nobody around here knows anything about her
family. We'll say you guys bought the farm
before you left, and set me up to run it.
(cutting off Hank's protest)
I thought you'd be happy. It's our farm~
I'm gonna bring it back~
HANK
It's so hard, Jacob. You don't just buy a
farm, you have to work it. You have to
know about machines and seed and
fertilizers and pesticides and herbicides
and drainage and irrigation and the weather
and the government. You don't know about
any of that. You'd end up just like Dad.
JACOB
(sharp, stepping back)
How do you think he ended up like that?
HANK
He had two mortgages riding on the place.
There was no way he could keep up--
JACOB
(his voice rising)
Where'd the money go? You think he just
spent it on the farm?
HANK
What else would--?
(CONTINUED)
48.
67 CONTINUED: (2) 67
JACOB
Why do you think he took the second
mortgage? Four years of college. Didn't
you ever wonder how he paid for that?
Hank seems truly shocked. He struggles for some response.
HANK
Jacob--
Jacob kicks at the porch railing, splintering it.
JACOB
I was supposed to get the farm.
Hank lifts his hands toward his brother, pleading.
HANK
Jacob, you've got the whole world. You can
go anywhere you want.
JACOB
This is where I want. Right here.
(he STOMPS his foot)
Home.
Hank stares off at the empty fields, his shoulders hunched.
Then, without looking, he reaches out, touches Jacob's arm, the
first sympathetic gesture we've seen him make toward Jacob.
68 EXT. SMALL TOWN MAIN ST. - DAY 68
Afternoon: sunny, cold. Hank comes from the direction of the
feedstore, walking fast. He turns in at the library.
69 INT. LIBRARY - DAY 69
Sarah is behind the counter, sorting books. Hank enters from
the street.
HANK
What •• ?
Sarah holds a finger to her lips, nodding toward MRS. TRILLING,
an old woman on the far side of the room. Then she waves Hank
behind the counter. She removes some papers from beneath a
book, spreads them out for him to see. Hank peers down at them.
WE SEE the papers: three photocopied newspaper articles.
SARAH
(whispering)
A four point four million dollar ransom.
(CONTINUED)
49.
69 CONTINUED: 69
(CONTINUED)
50.
69 CONTINUED: ( 2 ) 69
( SARAH
It's always been stealing. It's just that
before we didn"t know who we were stealing
from.
Mrs. Trilling COUGHS from behind the shelves. Hank and Sarah
freeze, glancing up. They wait a moment before:
SARAH (cont'd)
I think it's good we know where it came
from. I was beginning to worry that it
might be counterfeit, or marked.
HANK
It might still be marked.
Sarah shakes her head. She points toward the articles.
SARAH
It says they demanded unmarked money.
Hank seems unsure. Sarah gives him an impatient look.
SARAH (cont'd)
You"re being paranoid, Hank. It's over.
(
:
You're just looking for stuff to worry
about.
She shoves the articles into her bag.
70 INT. MITCHELL BEDROOM - NIGHT 70
Hank and Sarah are asleep. Very faintly, WE HEAR knocking from
downstairs. Hank lifts his head, listening. When the KNOCKING
resumes, he slips out of bed, leaving Sarah sleeping behind him.
71 INT. HANK'S FRONT ENTRANCEWAY - NIGHT 71
Hank tiptoes toward us down the stairs. Someone is JIGGLING the
front doorknob, trying to get in. Hank reaches the bottom,
stoops to peer through the window beside the door.
71 R HANK'S POV - THROUGH THE WINDOW 71R
(CONTINUED)
51.
7l(coti:~NTINUED: 7l(con)
LOU
Hey, Mr. Accountant.
(a conspiratorial whisper)
I'm here to make a tiny withdrawal.
HANK
Go home, Lou. TUrn around and go home.
LOU
(shivering}
It's freezing out, Hank. Invite me in.
Lou presses up against the door, and--when Hank retreats--steps
inside. He shuts the door behind him, grinning drunkenly.
HANK
I don't have time for this. I have to go
to work in the morning.
Lou nods, as if in understanding. He rubs his hands together,
glances around the entranceway.
LOU
I want my share.
HANK
The money's not here. And even if it were
I wouldn't give you any.
Lou rears back in indignation.
LOU
Just because you have it doesn't mean it's
yours.
(he taps his chest}
Part of it's mine.
HANK
Part of it might be yours. If we decide to
keep it. The plan was--
LOU
Come on, Mr. Accountant. Be a sport. Just
give me·a packet. I can come back later
for the rest.
Hank rests his hand against Lou's chest, very lightly. Lou
stares down at it.
HANK
If you ask me again, I'll go and burn it
first thing tomorrow. Is that clear?
(CONTINUED)
52.
7l(co~~NTINUED: (2) 7l(con)
(CONTINUED)
53.
7l(co~~NTINUED: (3) 7l(con)
• HANK
As Lou opens his car door, the light flashes on inside. WE SEE
a vague shape in the front seat. It's hard to tell, but it
could be Jacob. Lou ·starta the car and drives away.
711conJBACK TO SCENE 711con)
(CONTINUED)
54.
7l(col!~NTINUED: 7l(con)
HANK
You heard?
Sarah doesn't respond. She's holding her belly, perplexed.
HANK (cont'd)
I never should've told Jacob •••
(trailing off)
I knew it, too.
Sarah sits down suddenly, grimacing.
SARAH
Hank.
HANK
Even as I was doing it, I knew--
SARAH
(louder)
Hank!
Hank looks up at her, a dazed expression on his face.
HANK
What?
SARAH
I think--
(a wave of pain)
I'm having the baby.
72 INT. HOSPITAL HALLWAY - DAY 72
Jacob, carrying a present wrapped in pink tissue paper, moves
down the hall, scanning doorways for room numbers, brushing at
his hair while he walks. He finally finds the room he wants and
strides toward it, only to pause on the threshold.
73 INT. SARAH'S HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY 73
Hank and Jacob are standing a few doors down from Sarah's room,
speaking in BUSHED voices. There's no one else in the hallway,
but the doors to all the rooms stand open, and we can BEAR
people talking in them, along with the crying of a baby.
(CONTINUED)
55.
74 CONTINUED: 74
HANK
(surprised)
Gambling?
(Jacob nods)
Where?
JACOB
In Hinkley. At the casino. He's lost some
money.
RANK
' A lot?
Jacob shrugs, evasive. Hank starts to press for an answer, but
then smiles instead, looking past Jacob down the hall.
HANK'S POV - DOWN THE BALL
A YOUNG COUPLE is approaching, the man pushing his wife in a
wheelchair, the woman holding a swaddled newborn: they're being
discharged. A NURSE walks alongside.
BACK TO SCENE
(CONTINUED)
56.
74 CONTINUED: (2) 74
JACOB
I'm on both your sides. We're all in this
together.
HANK
(stepping close)
If you had to pick a side--
JACOB
(retreating)
I'm not going--
HANK
No, I want to know: Lou, or me?
Jacob glances down the hall, searching for a way out. Finally:
JACOB
I'd pick you. You're my brother.
75 INT. SARAH'S HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY 75
(CONTINUED)
57.
75 CONTINUED: 75
SARAH
I want you to buy one of those little tape
recorders--the little dictating ones--the
type you can hide in your pocket.
HANK
(not glancing up)
What do you want with a tape reco:·der?
Sarah glances toward the curtain, lowers her voice.
SARAH
You're going to tape Lou confessing to
Pederson•s murder.
Hank looks up in surprise, stops stroking her.
RANK
What're you talking about?
Sarah holds her finger to her lips, gestures toward the other
half of the room. They both stare at the curtain, behind which
the only sign of life is the Tl/.
SARAH
( You and Jacob invite him out for drinks,
you get him drunk, take him back to his
house, and then start joking about
confessing to the police. You take turns
pretending to do it--you first, Jacob
second, Lou last--and when Lou does it, you
tape him.
Hank starts to LAUGH, but then realizes she isn't joking.
HANK
That's absurd. There's no way it'd work.
The baby makes a MEWLING sound. Sarah smiles down at it.
SARAH
{in a baby voice)
Yes! Y~u•re a hungry little girl, aren't
you?
She jiggles the baby for a moment, then glances back up at Hank.
SARAH {cont'd)
Jacob helps you. That's the key. If Jacob
eggs him on, then he'll do it.
(CONTINUED)
58.
75 CONTINUED: ( 2) 75
HANK
But even if we could get him to say it, it
wouldn't mean anything. No one would ever
believe it.
SARAH
That doesn't matter. All you have to do is
get him to see that you and Jacob could
claim he killed Pederson just as easily as
he could claim you did it. If you make him
think that Jacob would side with you, he'll
never risk bringing in the police.
Hank considers this, frowning. Sarah watches him, caressing the
infant, then reaches out and touches his arm.
SARAH (cont'd)
we should at least try, shouldn't we? we
can't lose anything by trying.
•76 OMIT •76
(CONTINUED)
58A.
A79 CONT:NUED: A79
JACOB
I can"t trick him like that. He"d never
forgive me.
Hank jumps up, paces to the window, equally agitated.
(CONTINUED)
59.
A79 CONTINUED: {~) A79
HANK
Don't you get what's happening here? He
can send us both to jail.
JACOB
Lou"s not gonna--
HANK
(spinning back toward Jacob)
Know what the problem is? You don't have
any distance on this. You can't see what
he"s really like.
Jacob gives him an incredulous look. He sits up on the bed.
JACOB
You"re gonna tell me that?
HANK
I can tell you--
Furious, Jacob flings his half-empty beer can across the room.
The dog jumps up, BARKS.
JACOB
( You know nothing about him, Hank. You"ve
seen him drunk a few times, so you think--
Hank cuts him off, impatient.
HANK
Look. You want me to help buy back the
farm?
(silence)
Well?
Jacob still doesn't answer. He realizes he's trapped and is
searching unsuccessfully for a way out. Finally, he nods. Hank
steps over to the night table, grabs the phone, slams it down
into Jacob's lap.
HANK (cont'd)
Then you gotta help me first.
He strides back to the window, stares out into the night. Jacob
wavers, watching his brother's back. Finally, he picks up the
phone and begins, very slowly, to dial. WE SEE Hank shut his
eyes, as if oddly pained by his success.
79 INT. MITCHELL KITCHEN - NIGHT 79
(CONTINUED)
79 CONTINUED: 60.
79
Bank, Jacob and Sarah sit at the table, the meal finished.
Jacob's dog sleeps at their feet, its head resting on Amanda"s
(CONTINUED)
80 CONTINUED: 61.
80
bear. Hank and Jacob are telling Sarah a story, each trying to
be the one to get it out, talking one over the other.
JACOB
And just when our dad's putting the final
touches on it--he's way up on a ladder
tightening some bolts--
HANK
This breeze starts the windmill's sails
spinning--
JACOB
Smack1
HANK
They hit him right in the face, knock him
off the ladder.
SARAH
{her hand over her mouth)
Was he hurt?
Hank and Jacob both LAUGH. Hank pours Jacob more wine.
HANK
Mom thought so.
JACOB
She saw it happen from the house, and was
sure he'd broken his neck, so she called
the volunteer fire department.
HANK
All his buddies from town came rushing out,
sirens racing, only to find him sitting in
the kitchen with an ice-bag on his face.
The all LAUGH.
JACOB
He never forgave her for that.
HANK
I can still hear him bitching about it:
"Why didn't you wait to see if I got up,
for Christ's sake?"
Everyone LAUGHS. From upstairs WE HEAR Amanda begin to cry.
Sarah listens for a beat, then SIGHS, standing up.
SARAH
Her Majesty calls •••
(CONTINUED)
52.
80 CONTINUED: ( 2) 80
A long room with a bar running down one side, a line of booths
down the other. The place is loud, smoke-filled. Hank, Jacob
and Lou are drinking in a booth. Jacob sits beside his brother,
looking tense, distracted. Lou is leaning forward, a bit tipsy,
addressing Hank with surprising earnestness.
(CONTINUED)
81 CONTINUED: 63.
81
LOU
I_g~ess what I'm trying to say is maybe I
llll.SJudged you, Hank. You can see how that
~ght"ve happened, cancha? 'Cause you're a
bit ~re ••• I don't know ••• let's say •••
'seri~us' ~han a guy like me, and maybe
sometimes it can come across like you've
sorta got a stick up your ass. I mean, to
someone who doesn't know you, who can't see
beneath that first impression. And
maybe ••• maybe sometimes I can come off as
a bit of an asshole ••• You think?
Hank starts to deny this, but Lou waves him into silence.
LOU (cont'd)
No, no, I know what I'm talkin' about. But
fuck it, all in the past, right? Whaddya
say?
He extends his hand across the table. It takes Bank a moment to
understand what's expected of him. Then, while Jacob watches
with something close to disgust, Bank smiles, shakes Lou's hand.
HANK
Sounds good to me.
LOU
Hell yes! Live and let live!
He drops Bank's hand, quickly downs a shot, then wipes his mouth
on his sleeve, BELCHING.
LOU (cont'd)
Gotta take a leak.
Lou rises, a bit unsteady on his feet. AS he's moving along the
bar to the bathroom, he stumbles into a large, BEARDED MAN on a
stool. The man glances over his shoulder, and Lou gives him an
angry stare, hitching up his belt.
LOU
Think that's funny, tripping people on the
way to the can? Think you're some kind of
comedian?
The bearded man spins to face Lou. The bar begins to quiet.
BEARDED MAN
Listen, buddy. Looks like you might "ve had
a few too--
( CONTINUED l
6-L
81 CONTINUED: (2) 81
LOU
Don't you buddy me.
The bearded man starts to climb off his stool, but as he does
so, Jacob suddenly appears, resting his hand on Lou's shoulder.
JACOB
Maybe it's time we hit the road, Lou.
Whaddya think?
Hank is standing behind Jacob, holding Lou's jacket. Lou allows
himself to be led away, but not without a parting shot.
LOU
(pointing at Jacob)
He's my buddy.
(pointing at Hank)
He's my buddy, too.
(to the bearded man)
You're not my fucking buddy.
82 EXT. LOU'S FRONT YARD - NIGHT 82
Jacob's truck pulls into the driveway. Hank, Jacob and Lou are
inside; Jacob's dog is in the back. Lou's house is dark.
( INT. JACOB'S TRUCK
Lou and Jacob are taking turns sipping from a bottle of whiskey.
LOU
we gotta be real quiet. Nancy's asleep.
83 INT. LOU'S FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT 83
(CONTINUED)
83 CONTINUED: 65.
83
. NANCY (cont'd)
This old_drunk was telling jokes to his two
drunk friends, keeping up his wife who
unlike him, had a job she had to go to'in
the morning.
BACK TO SCENE
(CONTINUED)
66.
83 CONTINUED: (2) 83
(CONTINUED)
67.
83 CONTINUED: (3) 83
LOU
Do him crossing the stream, Jake.
(Jacob hesitates)
Aw, come on. He don't care. Do you Hank?
Hank stares at Jacob, who's leaning forward to refill his glass.
His hands are unsteady, and he sloshes whiskey onto the table.
HANK
Crossing the stream?
Jacob takes a sip of whiskey--mimicking Hank again. Then he
stands up and begins making fun of the way Hank crossed the
stream that first day, as they made their way through the woods
to the plane. He exaggerates Hank's awkward hops, his teetering
in midstream. Lou CLAPS and GUFFAWS: it's obvious this has
been a recurrent joke between them. Hank blushes.
LOU
Do him getting bit by the crow!
Jacob ignores him. His smile has faded.
JACOB
we never should"ve let him keep the money.
( Look at him. He thinks he owns us.
Lou"s smile fades. Hank rises, picks up his jacket, appalled.
HANK
Look, we"ve all had too much to drink.
Maybe we should--
JACOB
Isn't this what you want? Me to pick a
side?
HANK
What're you talk--
JACOB
(sneering, to Lou)
Know what's gonna happen? He's gonna end
up confessing. Crawling into Carl's office
and spilling his guts.
Hank starts pulling on his overcoat.
LOU
Fuck yes. He"ll rat on us to get off the
hook.
(CONTINUED)
68.
83 CONTINl.itD: ( ~) 83
Hank begins moving across the room toward the front door. Jacob
watches him, his grin fading, his voice turning steely.
JACOB
Let's do him confessing. You be him, and
I'll be Carl.
Hank turns, staring. Jacob avoids his gaze. SNICKERING, Lou
gulps some whiskey, stands up and mimes knocking on a door.
Hank moves back toward the couch.
LOU
{mimicking Hank's voice)
Carl?
Hank pulls off his coat, sits back down.
JACOB
Yes? Who is it?
LOU
It's Hank Mitchell. I got something to
tell you.
JACOB
( Come on in, Hank. Have a seat.
Lou pretends to open a door. He walks in place, grinning, then
sits down. Hank fumbles at his shirt, pretending to scratch at
his chest. With a SOFT CLICK, the tape recorder turns on.
LOU
It's about Dwight Pederson.
JACOB
Yes?
LOU
well, he didn't die in an accident.
JACOB
What do you mean?
Lou feigns glancing nervously around the room. Then:
LOU
I killed him.
JACOB
You killed Dwight Pederson?
(CONTINUED)
69.
83 CONTINUED: (5) 83
LOU
Ismothered him with his scarf, then I
pushed him off the bridge into Anders'
Creek. I made it look like an accident.
That's enough for Hank: he gestures at Jacob to stop.
HANK
Okay. That's--
Jacob ignores him.
JACOB
Why would you do something like that?
LOU
•cause four million dollars is worth a hell
of a lot more to me than some old man's
life--
Hank reaches up, turns off the tape recorder in his pocket.
HANK
(firm, to Jacob)
That's enough.
( LOU
(shaking his head)
I wanna get_to the part where you offer to
testify against us. Keep asking me
questions, Jake.
Jacob takes a swallow of whiskey. He seems spent by the whole
episode, drained. He drops back on the couch as Hank takes out
the tape recorder and rewinds it. Hank presses play, sets it on
the table. They all stare at it while it replays Lou and
Jacob's DIALOGUE. Lou looks utterly bewildered.
LOU (cont'd)
You taped us?
Neither Hank nor Jacob answers him. When the tape is finished,
Hank reaches forward and rewinds it.
LOU (cont'd)
What're you doing, Hank?
HANK
It's your confession. It's you saying how
you killed Dwight Pederson.
Lou stares at the tape recorder for a moment, realizing finally
what it's for. He sneers at Hank.
(CONTINUED)
70.
83 CONTIN'lED: ( 6) 83
LOU
Nobody's gonna believe that thing. It's
obvious I'm just kidding around.
HANK
If you and I both went into Carl's tomorrow
and claimed that the other killed Dwight
Pederson, who do you think he'd believe?
You? A forty-year-old, unemployed high
school dropout who's proud when people call
him the town drunk? Or me? I've got a
job, Lou. I don't get drunk and shout
obscenities at my wife in public. I don't
pass out in other people's doorways.
A tense moment, then Lou tries to grab the tape recorder, but
Hank snatches it away, returns it to his shirt pocket.
LOU
(angry, humiliated)
You fucking--
He rises. Hank does, too. Lou scowls at him, waves at Jacob.
LOU (cont'd)
Come on, Jake.
Jacob sags deep into the couch, not looking at either of them.
JACOB
The tape doesn't hurt you. It's just to
keep you from hurting him.
LOU
What?
JACOB
He's not gonna use it unless you tell on
him. That seems fair, don't it?
LOU
You're in this together?
Jacob finally looks up:
JACOB
He promised to help me buy back the farm.
Lou clenches his fists, his body taut with anger. He glares at
Jacob until Jacob looks away, then spins and strides toward the
front of the house, disappearing down the hallway to the left.
(CONTINUED)
71.
83 CONTINUED: ( 7) 83
Hank heads toward the front door, gesturing for Jacob to follow.
Jacob hesitates, then starts slowly after him, a bit wobbly on
his feet. As Hank opens the door, he glances down the hall.
HANK'S POV - LOU'S DOWNSTAIRS HALL
Lou approaches from the garage, jamming shells into his shotgun.
BACK TO SCENE
Jacob pushes Hank.
JACOB
Move •••
(CONTINUED)
72.
84 CONTINUED: 84
They both begin to YELL. The dog jumps from the truck, BARKING.
JACOB
Just leave him alone--
LOU
You stabbed me in the back. In my own
house.
JACOB
Please, Lou.
LOU
You know I need the money. I need it
tomorrow. They're gonna take my truck.
JACOB
Just put the gun down.
LOU
Why should he get to keep it? He's got a
job. We're the ones who need it. He just
wants it--
NANCY (OS}
Lou?
( (instantly, silence}
What's going on?
She starts down the stairs. WE SEE her feet through the top of
the doorway. Lou is still pointing his gun at Hank, but he's
looking at Jacob. His face is bright red.
LOU
How could you do this? You think he's your
friend? He doesn't give a fuck about you.
(he glances at Hank}
Do you?
HANK
come on, Lou. we can talk this through.
Lou raises the gun till it's pointing just above Hank's head,
and pulls the trigger. There's a tremendous EXPLOSION. The dog
runs off. An eerie quiet settles in. Lou pumps another shell
into the chamber, gives Hank an edgy smile.
LOU
That was just an in-sin-u-a-tion.
He steps forward, presses the gun to Hank's forehead. Hank
holds himself rigid, too frightened to move. He shuts his eyes.
(CONTINUED)
73.
84 CONTINUED: (2) 84
HANK
Lou •••
Hank steps inside. Lou lies on his back a few feet from the
door, a small hole in his forehead. His shotgun rests beside
him. A large puddle of blood is spreading across the floor.
Nancy rushes down the stairs, WAILING. She crouches beside
Lou's body, but doesn't touch it. Hank steps forward, as if to
comfort her. When she sees him coming, she backs toward the
family room, SOBBING hysterically.
HANK
It's okay, Nancy.
NANCY
(shaking her head)
we gotta call--
She spins, starts into the family room, but Hank grabs her arm.
HANK
wait. We have to decide what--
Nancy SCREAMS, yanks her arm free. She turns on him in a
frenzy, CRYING, her words unintelligible. Hank makes a quieting
gesture with his hands. Jacob steps through the door, looking
dazed, clenching his rifle.
HANK (cont'd)
Nancy. You can still have his share.
Nancy flinches, shocked into momentary silence. Then:
NANCY
You bastards.
(CONTINUED)
74 •
• 85 CONTINUED: 85
HANK
Shhh--
He makes another quieting motion, but she starts toward him, her
fists clenched, her face distorted with rage. Hank backs away.
NANCY
You think I'm going to let you keep the
money? You fucking--
Hank retreats across the entranceway. Nancy pursues him. As
she passes Lou's corpse, she stumbles against the shotgun,
kicking it across the tiles. They all stare down at it.
There's a pause, then Nancy stoops, picks up the gun, pumps it.
Hank lunges forward, grabbing for the barrel. They struggle,
and Hank rips the gun from her hands. Nancy falls backward,
tripping down the step into the living room, landing on her rear
end. SHRIEKING, she lifts her arms to protect herself, thinking
Hank's about to shoot her.
HANK
It's okay. I'm not--
He crouches to lay the gun down. Nancy scrambles to her feet,
begins backing into the living room, still SHRIEKING.
HANK (Cont'd)
Shhh, Nancy. Please.
Hank starts after her, the gun in his hands. Nancy turns to
run. There's a doorway in the back corner of the room, leading
to the kitchen, and she heads straight for it, knocking over an
end table in her flight.
HANK (cont'd)
Wait!
He sprints after her, into--
86 LOU'S KITCHEN 86
(CONTINUED)
75.
86 CONTINUED: 86
I
in her hand. She FIRES, and the bullet SLAMS into the wall to
Hank's left. Hank scrambles out of the doorway, back into--
87 LOU'S FAMILY ROOM 87
Nancy FIRES again. The bullet comes through the doorway, THUDS
I into the couch. Hank rushes backward, not watching where he's
going: he stumbles into the overturned table, falls onto his
I back just as Nancy appears. She aims her pistol at him, but
before she can shoot, he FIRES the shotgun from the floor. The
blast hits her in the chest, knocking her back into the kitchen.
A long, eerie beat of silence, then Hank struggles to his feet.
He"s starting hesitantly toward the kitchen when he hears--
JACOB
(terrified)
Hank •• ?
--and jumps, spinning to ailll the gun at Jacob, who's still
standing in the front doorway. Jacob cowers. Hank holds the
gun on hilll for a moment, trying to find his bearings. Then he
pumps the shotgun, swings it a few inches to the right, FIRES
into the wall. He SHOOTS the ceiling, the annchair, the coffee
table, Jacob flinching at every·shot.
( 88 INT. LOU'S KITCHEN 88
Hank crouches over Lou's body, plants his prints on the gun,
sets it on the floor. He glances into the family room, which is
empty, and a frightened look comes over his face.
(CONTINUED)
76.
90 CONTINUED: 90
HANK
Jacob?
He rises quickly to his feet. Jacob's parka is lying on the
floor a few yards away. Hank steps over and picks it up.
HANK (cont'd)
(yelling)
Jacob?
After a beat, WE HEAR, very faintly, a gasping sound--like a
stifled sob--come from the kitchen. Bank steps down into the
living room, hurrying toward the kitchen's open doorway.
91 INT. LOU'S KITCHEN - NIGHT 91
Rank edges his way around the puddle. There's an open doorway
just beyond Nancy's body, leading down to the cellar, lost in
darkness. Rank reaches in, flicks on the light, REVEALING:
THE CELLAR STAIRS
Jacob sits midway down the steps, his head in his hands. After
a beat, he turns, blinks up at us over his shoulder. It's clear
that he• s been crying. Hank watches him from the doorway, a
worried look on his face.
HANK
What're you doing?
Jacob shrugs, struggles for a smile, but can't quite make it.
JACOB
Biding.
They look at each other for a moment in silence. Hank shifts
the parka from his right arm to his left.
RANK
You gonna be okay?
(CONTINUED)
77.
91 CONTINUED: 91
( Jacob thinks for a moment, then shakes his head. His mouth
starts to tremble, and he turns away.
HANK (cont'd)
we can make this work, Jacob. we can--
He starts down the steps, and Jacob jumps up, turning to face
him, scared. He shakes his head again, slowly at first but then
more and more quickly.
JACOB
No •••
(CONTINUED)
79.
93 CONTINUED: ( 2) 93
HANK
Jacob said that?
Carl nods: a long pause, while Hank searches for a solution.
He stares at his feet, CRACKS his knuckles, one after the other.
HANK (cont'd)
Well, I suppose I can see how it might"ve
seemed that way to him.
Another pause. The policemen exchange a look. Hank shifts in
his chair, looking right through Carl, straining for a solution.
Then, slowly:
HANK (cont'd)
Because he did go to the truck alone ••• I
mean, I followed him, but then when I heard
Nancy get shot, I turned back toward the
house. I was on the porch when Lou started
to come outside, and that's when I turned
to run back down the walk again.
(a pause)
so, I guess that's how it might've seemed
to Jacob that I was running out of the
house.
(
The detective scribbles more notes. Carl studies Hank. Before
he can speak, a policeman enters the room, carrying a pot of
coffee. Be leaves the door ajar behind him. Hank glances out.
BANK'S POV - OUT THE DOOR
Sarah sits in the hallway, the baby in its pouch. She stares
blankly in at us, as if she were looking at a stranger.
BACK TO SCENE
The policeman sets down the coffeepot, exits, shutting the door
behind him. The Sheriff refills everyone's cups.
CARL
And then?
BANK (cont'd)
Then Lou fired at me and missed. Be pumped
the gun to try again. And that •s when
Jacob shot him.
Hank glances from policeman to policeman, fearing another
challenge. When none arrives, he waves at the tape recorder.
BANK (cont'd)
I guess you know the rest.
(CONTINUED)
80.
93 ::ONTINUED: ( 3) 93
A long pause. Then the Sheriff nods, shutting off the machine.
** 93A THRU 93X - OMITTED **
0
93l EXT. ORCHARD - DAY - ON THE PLANE •93l
(CONTINUED)
BOA.
*93N CONTINUED: *93N
( COWORKER ( OS )
I swear it--
(
81.
In-SLIGHT SLOW MOTION, LOU bumps into the bearded man on the
stool, and they begin to argue.
DOUG (OS cont'd)
--nearly took-a guy's head off-
Lou lunges at the bearded man, swinging wildly, shouting curses.
They tumble to the floor. Jacob steps in and pulls Lou off.
•93S EXT. COUNTRY CEMETERY - DAY •93S
(CONTINUED)
82.
*93S CONTINUED: *93S
Off to the side the old farmer from the bar and Mrs. Trilling's
husband, Clifford, stand watching, whispering quietly together
as the service is completed.
FARMER (cont'd)
--Jacob had to manhandle him out of there.
Clifford shakes his head, sadly, watching Jacob toss a shovelful
of icy dirt onto his friend's casket.
CLIFFORD
It's just such a tragedy, the whole thing.
•93T INSERT - CONDOLENCE CARD •93T
Hank heads for the bedroom, loosening his tie. He pauses in the
doorway.
RANK'S POV - THE BEDROOM
The baby is on the bed. Sarah's changing her diaper, but she's
paused to play for a moment. She dips her head to Amanda's,
then pulls it back, COOING. Amanda smiles, kicks her feet.
Sarah glances up, turns toward us, her face blank. Finally,
after a long moment, she manages a smile.
BACK TO SCENE
Hank steps into the room, moving to his bureau. Amanda drops
her pacifieri it rolls off the bed. As Sarah bends to pick it
up, WE SEE the duffel bag still hidden beneath the box springs.
** 94 THRU 105 - OMITTED**
186 INT. SMALL TOWN BAR - NIGHT 186
(CONTINUED)
82A.
106 CONTINUED: 106
(CONTINUED)
83.
106 CONTINUED: (2) 106
It's dark out, but WE can SEE earl's truck parked in the street.
187conBACK TO SCENE 187con
Hank unlocks the door, pulls it open. Carl stands on the porch,
his hat in his hands, his face grave.
CARL
Hope I didn't wake you, Hank.
(he gestures upward)
Saw a light on, so I figured--
Hank shakes his head.
HANK
It's all right.
CARL
I hate having to do this.
(he sighs, glances back toward
his truck)
See, I was driving by Lou Chambers's place,
and I saw your brother's truck parked right
in the center of the road there, could
hardly even squeeze by it. Found him
inside the house, passed·out in an
armchair. LOoks like he popped a pane of
glass to get in. Place was all dark, heat
off--he probably would've frozen to death,
if I hadn't happened by.
He pauses, as if waiting for Hank to respond, but Hank doesn't.
CARL (cont'd)
I'd have taken him to his apartment, but he
was pretty firm about wanting to come here.
Hank finally realizes what earl's saying: Jacob's in the truck.
HANK
No, no, I appreciate it. I mean I •m sorry
you even had to ••• Is he gonna be in any
trouble?
Carl waves him into silence.
CARL
I know you guys have been having a rough
time. Just have a talk with him, all
right?
(he turns to lead Hank to the
truck) ·
I'll try to keep a tab on him, too.
as.
(CONTINUED)
86.
111 CONTINUED: 111
'
( Hank hesitates, surprised that she's awake. Then he settles in
behind her. He's just reaching out to touch her when--
SARAH (cont'd)
If he's gotta drink, I'd rather he did it
here than somewhere else.
--and he stops.
HANK
He'll be all right. He's just--
SARAH
(rolling to face him)
You and I can help each other through this,
Hank. He doesn •t have anybody.
From her crib across the room, Amanda begins to CRY.
HANK
Meaning?
SARAH
You should keep an eye on him, that's all.
She starts for the crib, leaving Bank lying there on his side.
112 EXT. LOU'S BOUSE - DAY 112
There's a "For Sale" sign in the yard; the place looks even more
dilapidated than before. Jacob's truck sits in the center of
the road. Bank's car approaches, stopping behind it.
INT. BANK'S CAR - DAY
Bank puts the car in park, waits for Jacob to clilllb out, but
Jacob doesn't move. Be stares off at the house, then out at his
truck, thinking. When he finally speaks, his voice is quiet •
.;rACOB
Maybe I can get a family of my own now.
(a pause; he turns to Bank)
I mean, _with the money and all.
He appears to expect a response from Bank, but Bank just watches
him, mute. Jacob continues, his voice suddenly irresolute.
JACOB (cont'd)
Don't you think somebody'll marry me if I'm
rich?
\ Hank starts to smile, but then realizes how serious Jacob is.
(CONTINUED)
87.
112 CONTINUED: 112
HANK
You don't need the money for that.
Jacob gives him a knowing look, not believing Hank means this.
HANK (cont'd)
What about Carrie Richards? Didn't she
like you without the money?
Jacob shakes his head, smiling grimly.
JACOB
Her friends all chipped in and bet her a
hundred bucks she wouldn't go steady with
me for a month.
HANK
(with sympathy)
Jesus, Jacob.
JACOB
It wasn't that bad. I mean, we never
kissed or touched or anything like that,
but we walked around a lot together, and
talked, and when the month was up she still
( stopped to say hello when we passed in the
hall, which she didn't have to do.
(a pause)
I'm thirty-three, Hank, and I've never even
kissed a woman. If being rich'll change
that, then fine. I don't care if it's just
for the money.
They fall silent: an awkward moment which Jacob finally breaks
by pushing open his door. He turns back before he climbs out,
though, his voice like a child's, full of uncertainty.
JACOB (cont'd)
I'm gonna be happy now, aren't I?
Hank only hesitates for a second. Then he manages a nod.
RANK
sure you are. we all are.
Jacob nods, too, staring off down the road, pursuing a vision.
JACOB
I'm gonna buy the farm, and marry someone
nice, and have lots of kids, and you and
Sarah and Amanda'll come visit, and we'll
stay up late drinking on the porch just
like Dad and Uncle Ted used to.
(CONTINUED)
88.
112 CONTINUED: (2) 112
Bank reaches to touch his scalp, but the barber bats his hand
away. Carl CHUCKLES.
HANK
(smiling)
Don't you have any crimes to solve?
CARL
Maybe. Think you could track down Jacob,
bring him by my office tomorrow afternoon?
He moves to the counter, lifts the lid on a glass jar full of
lollipops. Bank starts to twist his head to follow him, but the
barber won't let him. -
HANK
Why's that?
(CONTINUED)
89.
113 CONTINUED: 113
CARL
Man from the FBI's gonna be driving
through, thought you two might be able to
help him out.
Hank starts to turn his head again, and again the barber stops
him. Carl finds the flavor he"s looking for, unwraps it, sticks
it in his mouth, turns toward Hank with a smile.
CARL (cont'd)
seems they're looking for a missing plane.
114 INT. SMALL TOWN BAR - DAY 114
Hank and Jacob exit the bar, Jacob blinking at the sunlight.
Down the street, an old man is unloading firewood from the rear
of a pickup. Hank and Jacob start down the sidewalk.
HANK
It's really not that difficult. we go in,
you say--
(CONTINUED)
90.
115 CCNTINUED: 115
Jacob starts shaking his head, and Bank stops, turns to face
him, furious.
HANK (cont'd)
All you have to do is think! Just use your
head for once in your life.
JACOB
(snapping back)
Why'd you have to kill Pederson? If you'd--
Bank shoves his brother, knocking him back a step.
HANK
What the fuck does that have to do with
anything?
JACOB
(shoving back)
None of this'd be happening if--
Jacob slips as he pushes at Hanle, falling to his knees. Bank
leans down, speaks right into his face:
BANK
(loud)
Who hit him in the first place, huh? EVery
step of the way you"re the one who's pushed
us into trouble, and I'm the one who's
dragged us back out.
Jacob lowers his eyes, silenced. A beat, then he struggles to
rise. Bank steps back, glancing up and down the street.
BANK'S POV - down the street
The old man with the firewood is peering toward us. Be waits a
moment, then returns to his unloading.
BACK TO SCENE
Jacob brushes snow from his knees. Hank lowers his voice.
HANK (cont'd)
If we stick to our story, we'll skate right
through this, all right? I promise.
Be takes Jacob's elbow, starts to lead him away, and WE BEAR,
very loud, a baby begin to cry. This carries over into--
91.
Sarah paces across the room, trying to quiet the WAILING baby.
Hank is changing from his work clothes, but he's so nervous that
he keeps starting a new task--untying his shoe, unbuttoning his
shirt--before finishing the last.
HANK
Maybe we should leave. Just take the
money, the baby--
SARAH
Stop it, Hank.
She drops Amanda to the bed, checks her diaper, then refastens
it. She sits beside Hank, tries to force a breast on the baby.
Amanda twists away, SCREAMING. Hank stands up, begins to pace.
SARAH (cont'd)
You go in, see what he knows. If it looks
bad, we can always burn the money. That• s
still our only real tie to--
BANK
The connections are just under the surface,
Sarah. It wouldn't be that hard for things
to come together. There's the plane and
Pederson, there's Lou and Nancy and--
Sarah grabs him as he passes before her. With one hand she
holds the SCREAMING baby, with the other she 'grips Hank's wrist.
SARAH
You've got to remember how people see you.
You' re just a normal guy. A nice, sweet,
normal guy. No one would ever believe that
you'd be capable of doing what you"ve done.
Hank pulls himself free, walks to the window. Behind him, Sarah
continues to jiggle the SHRIEKING infant. Bank shuts his eyes,
rests his fingertips ·against the glass, pressing till they grow
white. Then he spins back toward Sarah--
BANK
Christi can't you shut her up?
They lock eyes for a moment, then Hank strides from the room.
SARAH
Hank? Hankl
WE HEAR him pound downstairs, wrench open the front door, slam
it shut behind him. Sarah rises, carries Amanda to the window.
92.
l Hank, Jacob and NEAL BAXTER sit before earl's desk. Baxter is a
large, crewcut man, dressed in a suit and trench coat. Carl is
behind his desk. His office is-neat and spare--a filing
I cabinet, a nearly empty bookshelf, a gun cabinet on the wall.
HANK
It was snowing pretty hard, so we weren't
really sure, but it sounded like an engine
coughing on and off. we pulled over to
listen, but we didn't hear anything more--
no crash, no engine, nothing.
He watches Baxter write this down. When Baxter finishes, he
shuts his notebook, then glances from brother to brother. Jacob
shifts uncomfortably in his seat, making it CREAK.
CARL
Anything to add, Jacob?
J"ACOB
It was probably just a snowmobile.
Another moment passes in silence, while Baxter continues to
examine them. Then he nods at Carl. He rises to his feet,
sliding his notebook into his jacket. Carl stands up, too.
CARL
Well, thanks for stopping by, boys.
Hank and Jacob both rise quickly, elated to be let off so
easily. Jacob even sneaks a grin at his brother as they start
to move toward the door. But then, just before they escape:
(CONTINUED)
93.
119 CONTINUED: 119
BAXTER
Think you could take us out there?
Hank and Jacob look apprehensively back at Baxter.
JACOB
To the nature preserve?
BAXTER
Have to go in the morning, I guess. After
the storm passes.
HANK
(to Baxter)
Can you tell us what's going on?
120 INT. MITCHELL KITCHEN DUSK 120
Hank has just come home. He's still wearing his overcoat, snow
melting on his shoulders • Sarah is washing lettuce at the sink.
. SARAH
There's no way it's from an armored car
robbery.
HANK
( This isn't a guess, Sarah. The guy from
the FBI told me where it's from.
SARAH
But it doesn't make sense. The kidnapping
made sense.
HANK
He's searching for a plane full of money.
_You can't tell me there's more than one of
those around here.
Hank pulls a bottle of beer from the refrigerator. The stove's
timer BUZZES. Sarah opens the oven, checks inside. WE SEE a
roast chicken, not quite done. She resets the timer.
SARAH
It's hundred dollar bills, Hank. If it
were an armored car, there'd be other
denominations. There'd be fifties and
twenties and tens.
Hank twists the cap off his beer, flips it into the sink.
HANK
Well congratulations, Sarah. I guess you
know more than the FBI.
(CONTINUED)
9-L
120 CONTINUED: 120
' ( Sarah starts to respond, but then stops, thinking, as Hank heads
into the hall. She waits a beat, then rushes after him.
121 MITCHELL FRONT ENTRANCEWAY - DUSK 121
Hank and Sarah sit at the table. Sarah is serving the chicken,
which is noticeably burnt. She starts to eat, setting aside the
burnt part. Hank watches her, ignoring his own food. He's
tense, overwrought.
SARAH
I'll call the FBI in the morning. I'll ask
for an Agent Baxter.
HANK
I'm meeting them at nine. They won't be
open before that.
SARAH
You can stall them for a bit. I'll call
from here, then call you at Carl's office.
HANK
And if there's no Agent Baxter?
SARAH
Then you won't go. You'll tell Carl that
the baby's sick and you have to come home.
(CONTINUED)
96.
123 CONTINUED: 123
HANK
And Jacob?
SARAH
Say he"s hungover. Carl'll believe that.
(sprinkling salt on her food)
No matter who this guy is, we don"t want
Jacob there.
Bank starts to protest, but Sarah jumps on him before he can.
SARAH
What do you want, Bank? You wanna just
walk out there and get shot by this guy?
I'm trying to come up with a plan--
HANK
(out of control)
A plan? Like the one to take the money
back to the plane, and we wind up killing
Pederson? Or the one to tape Lou and two
more people end up dying? That the sort of
plan you"re thinking of?
A long, strained beat of silence. Then, with sudden resolution:
HANK (cont'd)
I'm gonna take the money back to the plane.
(a bewildered look from Sarah)
The snow' 11 cover my tracks. By the time--
SARAH
Bank--
Bank stands up abruptly, nearly knocking over his chair. Be
heads toward the hall, leaving h~s food untouched behind him.
HANK
If we put it back, everything'll be just
like it used .to be.
For a moment, Sarah is too astonished to react. Then she jumps
up and starts after him.
SARAH
(furious)
That's what you think you want?
124 INT. MITCHELL FRONT ENTRANCEWAY - NIGHT 124
Bank is climbing the stairs. Sarah comes down the hall from the
kitchen, YELLING at him.
(CONTINUED)
97.
124 CONTINUED: 124
I
SARAH (cont'd)
Walking off to the feedstore every morning
for the next thirty years? Waiting for Tom
Butler to retire or die so you can finally
get a raise?
She stops at the foot of the stairs. Hank has vanished up them,
but she keeps SHOUTING after him.
I SARAH (cont"d)
coming home each evening to this cheap,
ugly house, with the basement flooding
every spring, the furnace breaking down
twice a year, those disgusting yellow tiles
on the kitchen floor? Is that all it"ll
take to make you happy?
Hank reappears at the top of the stairs. He starts down them,
dragging the duffel bag behind him.
SARAH (cont'd)
What about Amanda? You think she's gonna
like growing up in somebody else"s hand-me-
down clothes? Playing with other kid's old
toys because we can never afford to buy her
anything new?
Hank reaches the bottom of the stairs, turns to Sarah; a pained
look on his face.
HANK
Sarah--
Sarah keeps going, ignoring him.
SARAH
And me? You think I want to spend the rest
of my life stamping due dates on books?
Eight hours a day with a fake smile
plastered on my face, then home to cook
dinner for you, the same meals over and
over, casseroles and macaroni and meatloaf,
whatever the week's coupons allow, only
splurgin:g for a restaurant on birthdays or
anniversaries, and even then watching what
we order, skipping the appetizers, waiting
till we get home for dessert? You think
that's what I want?
Hank reaches toward her, sounding scared suddenly.
HANK
That's enough. You've made your--
(CONTINUED)
98.
124 CONTINUED: (2) 124
Hank sits in front of Carl's desk, his hat in his hand. earl is
at his filing cabinet, fiddling with a coffee maker. He turns,
hands Hank a steaming cup, then sits behind his desk.
CARL
Well, if Jacob can"t make it, that'll just
leave more of Linda's homemade breakfast
treats to go around.
He extends a greasy brown paper bag across the desk toward Hank.
(CONTINUED)
98A.
127 CONTINUED: 127
CARL (cont'd)
Her special creation: a dietetic deep-
fried donut--so inedible, you won't be able
to get enough down to be bad for you.
(CONTINUED)
99.
127 CONTINUED: (2) 127
( Hank gingerly takes one of the donuts, then holds it out to his
side. It's obvious he'd prefer not to taste it. Carl takes one
for himself, bites into it, chewing vigorously, smiling at Hank.
Hank glances at the phone, then his watch. It's 9:03.
HANK
(feigning indifference)
This guy show you a badge or anything?
CARL
A badge?
HANK
I always wondered if they look like they do
in the movies.
CARL
And how's that?
HANK
You know, bright and silver with the big F-
B-I stamped across the center.
CARL
sure they do.
(
HANK
You saw his?
CARL
(shaking his head)
No, but I've seen them before.
(he winks at Hank, nods out the
window)
Bet he'd show it to you if you asked him.
• 127R HANK ' S POV - OUT THE WINDOW *127R
(CONTINUED)
100.
*127BCONTINUED: *127B
CARL (cont'd)
Police Department.
(a pause; he smiles at Hank)
Yes, Ma"am. He's sitting right across from
me, trying to figure out how to avoid
eating one of rey wife's homemade donuts.
(a pause; he laughs)
Well, why don't you tell him. that yourself?
(another pause)
All right then. You take care.
(handing the phone to Hank)
Your wife.
Hank takes the phone.
HANK
Hey, honey.
SARAH'S VOICE
I It's him.. You gotta get out of there.
Hank is silent, taking this in. Be glances across the desk at
Carl, who's opened a newspaper and is busily reading the comics.
BANK
I'm staying, Sarah.
SARAH'S VOICE
What do you mean, you're staying? We
agreed--
BANK
(turning away, whispering)
What about Carl?
A long pause while Sarah tries to solve this oversight. Then:
SARAH'S VOICE
Tell earl... Tell him. to give the guy
directions, that you two'll meet him. there,
and then ••• and then •••
She trails off, at a loss. Hank watches Carl nibble his donut.
BAXTER (OS)
Everybody ready to roll?
Hank jumps in his chair, turning.
HANK'S POV - OFFICE DOORWAY
Baxter leans in the door. Bis jacket hangs open, and WE SEE his
shoulder holster beneath it, holding a large black pistol.
(CONTINUED)
102.
*127BCONTINUED: (c) *127B
BAXTER
Where's your brother?
CARL
Jacob won't be joining us today. Seems
like he tied one on last night.
Hank watches Baxter for a reaction, but Baxter appears unmoved.
CHUCKLING, Carl leads them out. Bank starts to follow, but then
turns back to set his uneaten donut on the edge of Carl's desk.
I He hesitates, glancing at the paperweight, then takes off his
hat, sets it beside the donut, and turns to leave.
I *128 OMIT *128
Carl's truck pulls over, and the three men climb out. Banlt
continues to push at the gun beneath his jacket, glancing
nervously at Baxter.
(CONTINUED)
104.
136 CONTINUED: 136
CARL
I figure the best way is for each of us to
take a different section of the woods.
(to Baxter)
If you or I see it, we'll fire a couple
shots into the--
WE BEAR a car approaching, and all three men turn to look.
BANK'S POV - DOWN THE ROAD
Jacob's truck is approaching us, fast.
CARL (OS cont'd)
Well, good for Jacob. This'll make things
go quicker.
BACK TO SCENE
(CONTINUED)
105.
136 CONTINUED: (2) 136
CARL
That's the spirit. Fresh air'll do you
good.
(to the others)
Everybody set?
Hank steps decisively forward.
HANK
I'll take the center.
He points into the woods, straight toward the plane.
137 EXT. WOODS - DAY 137
Hank trudges through the snow, weaving between the trees. The
other three men are nowhere in sight. He stops, stares.
138 HANK'S POV - DOWN INTO THE ORCHARD 138
From the rim, WE SEE the plane, nearly hidden by the fresh snow.
The crows still cling to the branches of the apple trees.
139 EXT. ORCHARD DAY 139
Hank glances around to make sure he's alone, then heaves the
beer can into the woods. As it SMACKS into a tree trunk, WE
HEAR a gunshot. Hank jumps.
141 EXT. WOODS - BAXTER 141
(CONTINUED)
106.
143 CONTINUED: 143
I
CARL (OS)
(from a distance)
I found it!
Hank starts to sprint back through the trees toward the orchard.
144 EXT. WOODS -
BAXTER 144
Carl is on the slope above the orchard, a huge grin on his face.
He's come around from the east, and is facing the tail of the
plane. Hank's tracks cut straight across the orchard, from left
to right. As Carl slides his pistol into his holster, he
pauses, listening. WE HEAR the whistle. Then:
HANK (OS cont'd)
( Run, earl!
Carl squints off into the woods, bewildered.
EXT. WOODS - HANK
Hank runs through the woods, blowing on the WHISTLE. He reaches
the rim of the orchard, and pauses, out of breath.
HANK'S POV - THE ORCHARD
Carl stands a few yards from the plane, staring toward us.
Behind him, WE SEE Baxter moving slowly down into the orchard.
BACK TO SCENE
HANK
Get out of there, Carll Run!
Hank starts down into the orchard. earl doesn't seem to hear
him. He smiles up at Hank, pointing at the plane.
CARL
You walked right by itl
Baxter is almost upon him now, glancing from the plane to Carl
to Hank. He seems confused.
(CONTINUED)
107.
145 CONTINUED: 145
(' HANK
Pull your gun on hi.ml Make him show you
his badge!
Baxter and Carl glance at each other. Baxter grins awkwardly,
shaking his head. Carl CHUCKLES. Hank is fumbling with his
coat, trying to get at the gun, which has slipped down into his
crotch. His fingers are clumsy with his gloves on, though, and
he can't get anything open. Finally he just points at Baxter.
HANK {cont'd)
Get your hands in the air!
Baxter and Carl LAUGH. Hank continues toward them, walking
awkwardly because of the pistol.
CARL
What the hell's going on, Hank?
HANK
Just do it, Carl. Make him show you his
badge.
earl turns to Baxter, shrugging•and smiling, as if in apology.
CARL
Maybe you should show him your badge.
BAXTER
(shrugging)
All right.
He reaches into his jacket. Carl turns back toward Hank.
CARL
See, Hank? He's gonna--
Behind him, WE SEE Baxter pull his pistol from its holster. He
aims it at the back of Carl's head.
146 EXT. WOODS - JACOB 146
(
147 EXT. ORCHARD - DAY 147
Hank crouches behind the pilot's seat. The garbage bag full of
money sits at his feet. He has the gun out, and is digging into
his pants for the bullets.
BAXTER (OS)
Hey!
Hank's hand is shaking, and the bullets spill out onto the
floor, bouncing away from him. He picks some up, tries to shove
them into his pistol, but none of them fit.
Suddenly, Baxter FIRES twice into the side of the plane. Hank
flinches, dropping his pistol,!as the bullets punch a pair of 14§A•
(CONTINUED)
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Goldenrod
109.
14BA* CONTINUED: 148 A*
I Hank squeezes through the doorway, holding the garbage bag out
before him. Baxter steps forward and grabs it.
149 CLOSE ON BAXTER 149
as he opens the bag, staring inside at the packets.
BAXTER
That's it?
(he looks up)
Where the fuck is the r -
He freezes.
BAXTER'S POV - HANK
Hank stands there, drenched with sweat, pointing his pistol at
us. Bis wound is leaking a line of blood down his face.
BACK TO SCENE
(CONTINUED)
110.
149 CONTINUED: 149
Jacob has arrived on the rim of the orchard. Hank watches him
come stumbling down the slope, his dog BARKING at his heels.
The crows are whirling and CAWING. Jacob is red in the face,
panicky. He stares from Baxter to Carl.
HANK
It's okay, Jacob.
Jacob moves toward Carl's body, as if in a trance.
JACOB
You killed •••
Hank shakes his head, points at Baxter.
HANK
He did.
Jacob falls to his knees beside Carl, reaching toward him. Hank
steps quickly forward.
HANK (cont'd)
Don't.
Jacob ignores him, taking earl's hand.
HANK (cont'd)
(growing angry)
You"re gonna mess it up.
Hank grabs his brother by his jacket, drags him backward. Jacob
falls on his rear end in the snow, then just sits there, too
upset to move. Hank examines Carl's.body, making sure Jacob
hasn't disturbed it. Then he turns back toward Jacob.
HANK (cont'd)
You understand what we"re gonna say?
Jacob doesn't respond. Hank steps toward him.
HANK (cont'd)
It's simple.
(he holds up his pistol)
We're gonna tell them Carl loaned me the
pistol to signal if I found the plane, and
when I saw Baxter shoot him, I--
Jacob lifts his head. His face is wet with tears. He rises to
his feet, his rifle slipping off his shoulder into the snow. He
gives Hank a desolate look.
JACOB
We can't, Hank.
(CONTINUED)
111.
l4S CONTINUED: (2) 149
HANK
What're you talking about?
(he waves around them)
It's perfect. This is exactly what--
JACOB
I'm turning myself in.
Hank is speechless with shock. He looks from Jacob, to the two
bodies, to the plane, searches for something to say. Then:
HANK
You can't do this again. We're gonna end
up in jail if you keep--
Jacob is looking at Carl's corpse, his face quivering.
JACOB
No •••
He turns quickly away, covering his eyes with his hand. Hank
steps forward, panic surging through his voice.
' HANK
This is it. I promise. We get through the
( next few hours--
JACOB
(on the edge of tears)
I can't ••• I can't •••
He takes a deep, ragged breath. Hank grabs his arm, frantic.
HANK
You want to be happy, Jacob? You want the
farm, a wife and kids, me and you drinking
on the porch late at night?
Jacob stares at him vacantly. Hank shakes his arm, shouts:
HANK (cont'd)
Do you?
(seemingly against his will,
·Jacob nods)
well this is how you get it. Right here.
Right now.
He starts to drag Jacob from the plane, past earl's body. The
heat of Carl's blood has begun to melt the surrounding snow.
HANK (cont'd)
This is what it costs--
(CONTINUED)
112.
149 CONTINUED: (3) 149
( After a few feet, Jacob pulls his arm away. He turns to Hank,
suddenly intense, points toward Baxter.
JACOB
use his gun.
Hank gives him a stupefied look. Jacob shuffles to Baxter's
body, picks up the dead man's pistol, holds it out to Hank.
Hank hesitates, then takes it. Jacob nods his approval.
JACOB (cont'd)
I don't wanna go to jail, Hank.
Hank seems relieved by these words.
BANK
You don't have to. We're gonna--
Jacob shakes his head.
JACOB
I can't pretend like you •••
ca pause)
Do it in the head, okay?
Hank stands frozen: confused, frightened, the guns in his
hands.
Stop it.
JACOB
From behind, so I don't have to see.
BANK
STOP IT!
They face each other in silence. Jacob's dog stands by Carl's
corpse, ears cocked, watching. Jacob holds out his hand.
JACOB
Here.
He steps forward, reaching to take back the gun. Hank retreats,
scared. Jacob shuffles to earl's corpse, crouches, removes the
policeman's gun from its holster. Then he stands, faces Hank.
BANK
Goddammit. we don't have time for this.
Jacob stares down at the pistol in his hand, struggling to think
things through. He looks up at his brother.
(CONTINUED)
113.
149 CONTINUED: (4) 149
( JACOB
You have to •••
(he points toward Baxter's
pistol)
It won't make sense if I--
His dog rubs against his legs, distracting him. He stares down
at her for a beat, then stoops to pet her. He hugs her roughly,
kisses the top of her head.
HANK
Jacob.
Jacob pushes the dog away, rises, lifts earl's pistol. For an
instant it looks as if he's going to aim it at Bank, but then he
presses it to his own temple.
HANK (cont'd)
(horrified)
Jacobi
JACOB
It's okay.
Bank raises Baxter"s pistol, points it at his brother.
HANK
Put the gun down.
Jacob nods, encouraging him.
JACOB
Do it, Hank.
Hank shakes his head, his face anguished.
HANK
No •••
Tears are starting to. leak down Bank's cheeks. Jacob cocks the
pistol's hammer with his thumb. Hank takes a single step toward
him, but Jacob backs away.
JACOB
You have to •••
Hank keeps shaking his head. Finally, Jacob shuts his eyes, his
face tightening in anticipation of the bullet's impact. WE SEE
his finger begin to squeeze the trigger.
HANK (cont'd)
NOi
(CONTINUED)
114.
149 CONTINUED: (S) 149
A GUNSHOT echoes out across the orchard, and Jacob crumples into
the snow. For an instant we shouldn't be sure who fired the
shot. Then WE SEE the bullet hole, in the exact center of
Jacob's forehead.
HIGH ANGLE SHOT
Hank is surrounded by the three corpses, the pistol still held
out before him. He slowly drops to his knees, then lifts his
head and lets loose with a long WAIL of pure despair. Behind
hlll, the plane shines in the sun. Mary Beth BARKS frantically,
while the crows whirl above the trees, CAWING.
TIME LAPSE DISSOLVE TO:
158 ORCHARD - SAME HIGH ANGLE SHOT - LATER 158
The trio of dead men are covered with blankets. Policemen mill
about the orchard. One of them videotapes the plane, another
photographs the bodies. A news cameraman is trying to approach
the scene, but the police won't let him. An ambulance crew
stands waiting for the photographer to finish with the corpses.
on the orchard's edge, WE SEE Hank talking to a group of
policemen.
CUT TO:
HANK
(CONTINUED)
116.
151 CONTINUED: (2) 151
CUT TO:
(CONTINUED)
117A.
154 CONTINUED: 154
(CONTINUED)
118.
154 CONTINUED: ( 2) 154
( SARAH (cont'd)
(desperate)
I can get a job at the FBI. I can steal
the list of numbers.
HANK
Sarah •••
She wipes at her tears, steps forward, holding out her hands.
SARAH
Please, Hank.
She touches his face, then leans in, hugging him, kissing him.
He tries to pull away, but she holds on, intense, and for an
instant it seems as if he might submit. Then he jerks free,
pushes past her to the fire. She grabs at him, and he turns,
shoving, knocking her back into the pile of money. She falls to
the floor.
Hank crouches, opens the fire screen. He throws the packets
onto the logs. Behind him, Sarah lies weeping on the carpet.
She's on her stomach, scrambling at the pile of money, dragging
packets toward her, trying to hide them beneath her body.
Hank stares into the fire. WE SEE the packets catching, their
edges curling, their ink going black. Very faintly, WE begin to
HEAR the grinding of the feed mill, which carries over into:
** 155 TBRU 160 - OMITTED
Hank is crouched beside Sarah, prying the packets from her grip.
She's sobbing. Behind them, the fire blazes. The GRINDING is
almost unbearably loud now.
*16BC INT. FEED MILL - DAY *16BC
\
llBA
(CONTINUED)
119.
*l60DCONTINUED: *1600
Sarah still lies on the carpet, curled into a ball, but she's no
longer crying. Like Bank, she's staring dully into the fire.
we watch them for a long ti.me before we
FADE TO BLACK