Bkissin

Review my drafts

Dear Bkissin,

Thank you for the work you are doing reviewing Wikipedia articles! I appreciate your effort.

Best, Christopher Liberty Owobusingye.

Regarding Draft: Daniel W. Greear

Hey there, Bkissin. I'm trying to understand why my article Draft: Daniel W. Greear was rejected. Please let me know how it reads like an advertisement. Thank you [[User: tjbrown1302|tjbrown1302

Declining My draft on Kuhlekwethu Maseko

Greetings I'd like you to have a review at my article in which you declined as the indiviual that is discussed is a big shot politician in South Africa and they are currently trending as we speak. Charles.Simon12 (talk) 03:11, 5 September 2024 (UTC)

Disambiguation link notification for September 6

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Interstate 59 in Louisiana

Responding to your G6 on this - looks like it has to be a histmerge actually, since content in the history was merged into Interstate 59. Before I do that, can I confirm that you checked that the draft doesn't just contain information that could be placed on the parent article? There's a hidden comment on the redirect that says:

   This state detail article was merged to the article
    on its parent route due to a lack of content.
    Please do not recreate the article by copying the 
    parent route article verbatim. You should only create
    this page if you are intending to expand upon the 
    content found in the parent route article.
    You may wish to check the page history to retrieve 
    the junction list from the pre-merge version, if one
    existed, if you are going to recreate the article.

Thanks, -- asilvering (talk) 18:14, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

It contains a whole section on the Louisiana history of the highway cited to newspapers from the time. I would suggest that this is probably good separately. Bkissin (talk) 18:48, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Great, thanks. As soon as a more-experienced admin confirms for me that I understand how to do the merge/move correctly, I'll publish the draft. -- asilvering (talk) 19:05, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

I tried my best to rewrite the whole page from scratch, using the sources that I found from Louisiana DOTD and Newspapers.com pages, so that it could look really well-written. I have a feeling that the article does look eligible for GA nomination as well when it gets published. NoobThreePointOh (talk) 19:23, 20 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewing my draft of Straits and Oriental Museum

Dear Bkissin,

Thank you for reviewing my draft on SOMuseum, you have commented that my draft needed more citations, especially on the Newspaper Buletin Mutiara, which is a Penang Government State Owned News publisher. I have added a few same news reports from the local Chinese Newspapers as well.

Thank You

Yours Sincerely, 

Gniam Jin Hong Geraldjinhong99 (talk) 03:21, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

draft:South Richland

before it was wiped i moved it to my sandbox to work on it, and change the parts that needed to be changed like how it sounded like a advertisement and added more reliable sources. then I forgot about it, and like 3 months later the user I dream of horses moved it from my sandbox to a draft (this is were the message was --> User talk:Average USA patriot) so I decided to work on it some more, and here we are now. Average USA patriot (talk) 03:01, 30 September 2024 (UTC)

Donald Trump Draft dialogue

NOTE: 'I was not sure what talk page to put this info on-- So I am doing both (let me know if thats okay for future reference)'

Draft: Donald Trump Rally Talk Page Conversation

"Was just wondering what sources would meet the requirements? I had provided multiple mainstream sources including Associated Press, KOMO, Seattle PI, KING 5 (NBC Affiliate), Seattle Times, and more of which directly covered the event and not just in passing mentions, but the entirety of those articles are regarding this specific event. It being a 2016 US Presidential Election backed article should be enough in itself, right?, as the goal of Wikipedia is to bookmark notable events first and foremost--I believe a historical event about one of the most influential and consequential leaders of our time (Good or bad) is worth having on the main space in the name of preserving written history.-- was hoping to start a dialogue about this @BKissin" Gonzafer001 (talk) 05:12, 3 October 2024 (UTC)

Banners

Hi there. Just to let you know that if you add {{WikiProject United States|NE=yes}} then you don't also need to add {{WikiProject Nebraska}} because it produces the same template — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 11:32, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

Recent AFC review

Is there a reason why you accepted Catherine Nzuzi wa Mbombo? It's improperly sourced as I can see 5 statements without sources. Notability isn't an issue because there is at least 2 reliable and independent sources though. Cowboygilbert - (talk) ♥ 02:18, 23 October 2024 (UTC)