Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Hurra-yi Khuttali/archive2

Source review (actioned items)

• 1 Not on the page given.
  • I assume you mean Fouruzani 2014, which an encyclopedic entry, therefore doesn't have a page
    • No, I meant Bosworth 1998. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
      • This is the page: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KPkeHVFsiVXOhUnn1lJTukaPii66JEg4/view?usp=drive_link Amir Ghandi (talk) 09:44, 12 December 2024 (UTC)

• • • • • Is Kalji (source) the same as Kaliji (our article)? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 11:05, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
          • Yes
• 3 OK
• 4 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
  • https://drive.google.com/file/d/15Ezp91xnaGkukHaZCFDkNQSSgYGBLmm3/view?usp=drive_link
    • OK, although you may want to move the reference into the parens, as otherwise it reads like the source supports "She used two nisbas" too (which it doesn't) Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Done
        • OK. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 11:05, 14 December 2024 (UTC)
• 5 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
  • https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zDyuepOEU8mndWVOAlJDDoS6j79t-nPi/view?usp=drive_link
    • OK, and thanks for highlighting the text too. Makes it much easier to verify. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
• 6 OK

10 OK

12 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?

• https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_WTL4HB1O-m5gqgZdrRd-ttA-mMq0VwD/view?usp=drive_link
  • OK.

13 OK I guess.

15 Unsure if "in secret" can be inferred from this.

• Removed

16 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?

• https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bfcchz1NoaBlxUHEQ7P7VGJVtddECu8k/view?usp=drive_link
  • OK. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 16:48, 8 December 2024 (UTC)

20 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?

• https://drive.google.com/file/d/1js8unUOBSPCK6eS6MTQ7QjVWxuSBZU1V/view?usp=drive_link

21 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?

• https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MR5dEtZta4R8XW3Ef7tgHyymH9t1qGVd/view?usp=drive_link
  • "Weak" and "which was dependent on the powerful leadership of the sultan." isn't in the screenshot you gave me. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
    • They're on the previous page/link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1js8unUOBSPCK6eS6MTQ7QjVWxuSBZU1V/view. Amir Ghandi (talk) Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
      • OK, although "weak" is a bit interpretative. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:03, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
        • Changed to inept

22 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?

• https://drive.google.com/file/d/1P62vo04fT--BBSZRlzT0D31ANVMYNMkw/view?usp=drive_link
  • Seems like that photo cut off part of the quote. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Here the rest of the quote: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cSJk5ukGOiVLt1QhXAklVgeSAy1PRUo2/view?usp=drive_link
      • Source only mentions one letter. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
        • This the rest of the page: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kt_z2k5CXBwK00LUOW5P1ZmyQ4vkTlyM/view?usp=drive_link Amir Ghandi (talk) 05:19, 13 December 2024 (UTC)

• 26 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
  • https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FpazeZU0vSVAKj2yNseeWVZUctuhQxkp/view?usp=drive_link
    • This needs a slight rewrite, as "political influence" and "succession" aren't equivalent. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Done
• 31 OK
• 34 Can you send me a copy of this page via email, or put it on a Google Drive or whatever and then post the link here?
  • https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HMsiShX4eEmptvL30d-dNN4JXEL7YiLe/view?usp=drive_link
    • Apparently not everybody agrees that Muhammad was executed too? Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:49, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Deleted 'executed'.

• 37 Not getting "Bayhaqi and his successors all respected her," from these pages at all?
  • Changed the source pages
    • Probably need a quote or so here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 17:45, 12 December 2024 (UTC)
      • @Jo-Jo Eumerus I went back and reviewed the pages and decided to delete the line. Amir Ghandi (talk) 10:54, 19 December 2024 (UTC)