User contributions for Ktmartell

30 November 2024

• 16:5416:54, 30 November 2024 diff hist −5 m Mass Effect 3 →Development: Very minor sentence tweak to make it read better. current
• 16:5116:51, 30 November 2024 diff hist +36 m Mass Effect 3 →Plot: Not sure if this is an improvement, but I tweaked the ending sentence to reference the names of the three options.
• 16:4416:44, 30 November 2024 diff hist −50 Mass Effect 3 Could have sworn I did this before, but "Microsoft Windows" should simply be "Windows". This is standard and you can see examples of this on virtually any other article.
• 16:3816:38, 30 November 2024 diff hist +65 m Mass Effect 3 →Critical response: Noticed that a couple of reviews didn't have author names. Hyperlinked 1Up.com.
• 16:2916:29, 30 November 2024 diff hist −133 m Mass Effect 3 Sentence with awards in the introduction looked a bit long, so I trimmed it down a bit to just include the two most impressive awards.
• 16:2416:24, 30 November 2024 diff hist +396 Mass Effect Legendary Edition →Reception: I've seen other articles begin referencing OpenCritic, so I'm adding here. If inappropriate, feel free to revert change!
• 16:1616:16, 30 November 2024 diff hist +23 m Mass Effect Legendary Edition →Reception: Added authors to Push Square and RPGamer reviews and tweaked titles (not sure why they said "Aces High")

30 April 2024

• 13:1013:10, 30 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Mass Effect 3 →Development: Fixed typo
• 13:0913:09, 30 April 2024 diff hist −238 Mass Effect 3 Because the involvement of Microsoft Game Studios isn't elaborated upon in depth within the Development section, I think we can remove from the introduction

9 February 2024

• 16:1016:10, 9 February 2024 diff hist −11 m Mass Effect 3: Citadel Removing "VFX Awards" alias from introduction to remain consistent with Reception section of article
• 16:1016:10, 9 February 2024 diff hist −130 Mass Effect 3: Citadel →Development and release: While the ME modding community does great work, it does not belong in this section, unfortunately

4 January 2024

• 18:3918:39, 4 January 2024 diff hist +660 Talk:Mass Effect 3 →Is new paragraph about same-sex romance options controversy undue weight?
• 18:3418:34, 4 January 2024 diff hist −2 m Mass Effect 3 →Legacy: Incredibly minor word tweak for consistency
• 18:3018:30, 4 January 2024 diff hist +26 m Mass Effect 3 →Setting: "Reapers" should be hyperlinked because it is the first appearance of the term in this article (not including the introduction)
• 18:2718:27, 4 January 2024 diff hist +27 Mass Effect 3 →Controversies: Divided section into two sub-sections to emphasize that the ending controversy should stand out and made a few minor wording/citation tweaks for consistency
• 18:2218:22, 4 January 2024 diff hist −121 m Mass Effect 3 →Plot: Found a superior reference for the ending events of the game, so I replaced the existing one from The Ringer

3 January 2024

• 18:2118:21, 3 January 2024 diff hist +186 Mass Effect 3 →Plot: Final line about the ultimate outcome of the game was removed, so I'm putting it back
• 17:0917:09, 3 January 2024 diff hist +96 m Mass Effect 3 →Controversies: Minor citation cleanup, and added an archived URL
• 17:0417:04, 3 January 2024 diff hist +787 Talk:Mass Effect 3 →Endings inadequately summarized: Reply Tag: Reply
• 17:0017:00, 3 January 2024 diff hist +366 m Mass Effect 3 →Plot: Added reference for the three ending options Tag: Disambiguation links added
• 16:5516:55, 3 January 2024 diff hist −596 Mass Effect 3 →Plot: Trimmed out a lot of minor revisions that have been made over the last few months that bloat the Plot without adding too much of value. Also being bold and removing the post-credits scene.. It's more a nugget than something that actually furthers the plot
• 16:3416:34, 3 January 2024 diff hist −1,411 LeBron James →Activism: Relatively minor citation cleanup for consistency, although I did remove some citations as they were unnecessary (e.g., don't need three citations for a single comment)

2 January 2024

• 17:2617:26, 2 January 2024 diff hist 0 m LeBron James →Activism: Picture looks better a little higher up
• 17:2417:24, 2 January 2024 diff hist −3,289 LeBron James →Activism: Major refactoring to reduce bloat and organize everything. Still needs a lot of work, but I don't think it reads like a dumping ground anymore

1 January 2024

• 16:4816:48, 1 January 2024 diff hist 0 m LeBron James →Off the court: Magazine images look a bit better moved up
• 16:4716:47, 1 January 2024 diff hist −103 LeBron James →Off the court: Minor wording tweaks and significant citation cleanup
• 15:5915:59, 1 January 2024 diff hist −176 LeBron James →Legacy: Removed sentence about wanting to play with his sons. Not relevant to legacy

16 November 2023

• 21:5621:56, 16 November 2023 diff hist +1,159 Talk:Mass Effect 3 →Is new paragraph about same-sex romance options controversy undue weight?: new section Tag: New topic
• 21:4221:42, 16 November 2023 diff hist +171 Mass Effect 3 →Writing: A couple of minor tweaks to gay romance paragraph in Writing section, and added archived URLs
• 21:2821:28, 16 November 2023 diff hist +280 Talk:Mass Effect Legendary Edition →Pinnacle Station DLC restoration by modders
• 21:2021:20, 16 November 2023 diff hist −870 Mass Effect Legendary Edition →Development: Post-release mods are not relevant to the Development section, so I am removing that information. I started a Talk section if anyone wants to discuss further, thanks!

17 October 2023

• 13:0913:09, 17 October 2023 diff hist +666 Talk:Mass Effect Legendary Edition →Pinnacle Station DLC restoration by modders: new section Tag: New topic

25 September 2023

• 17:0117:01, 25 September 2023 diff hist −1 m Dream Theater (album) →Track listing: Sentence was missing a period at the end
• 16:5816:58, 25 September 2023 diff hist +14 m Dream Theater (album) →Supporting tour: To stay consistent, added release years of Awake and SFAM
• 16:5316:53, 25 September 2023 diff hist −5 m A Dramatic Turn of Events →Search for a new drummer: "Five year" should have hyphen
• 16:5116:51, 25 September 2023 diff hist −8 m A Dramatic Turn of Events →Critical reception: Removed redundant hyperlinks

9 August 2023

• 14:5614:56, 9 August 2023 diff hist +8 m Mass Effect Legendary Edition Makes sense to hyperlink "Mac Walters" in the summary and once in the main body

15 June 2023

• 18:4718:47, 15 June 2023 diff hist +19 m Mass Effect Legendary Edition Fixed inconsistent date formatting (12 September 2021 -> September 12, 2021)
• 18:4218:42, 15 June 2023 diff hist −250 Mass Effect Legendary Edition The infobox should reflect credits for those who worked on MELE specifically. For example, Casey Hudson was not the director of MELE. Mac Walters was. I have tweaked the infobox to include MELE credits per Template:infobox video game descriptions.

28 May 2023

• 19:3919:39, 28 May 2023 diff hist −27 m Mass Effect 3 "Normandy SR-2" only needs to be hyperlinked once
• 19:3319:33, 28 May 2023 diff hist +190 Mass Effect: Andromeda Added a new sentence to the introduction regarding the consequences of ME:A's disappointing results - BW Montreal was absorbed and the ME franchise was put on ice
• 19:1019:10, 28 May 2023 diff hist −40 Mass Effect 3: Citadel Bringing the article more in line with the best practice of "Windows" as opposed to "Microsoft Windows"

7 January 2023

• 16:5716:57, 7 January 2023 diff hist −3 m Mass Effect 3 Reordered the list of platforms by date of release and then alphabetically where applicable
• 16:4116:41, 7 January 2023 diff hist −44 Mass Effect 3 The best practice among other video game articles in good standing appears to be "Windows" instead of "Microsoft Windows" or "PC". I went ahead an updated all instances except the aggregate score section, where "PC" is preferred. Thanks!

4 January 2023

• 20:3620:36, 4 January 2023 diff hist −41 Mass Effect Legendary Edition The article inconsistently used "PC" and "Microsoft Windows". I reviewed a number of other articles in good standing and it appears "Windows" is the most common practice. Everything has now been updated to "Windows" except "PC" in the aggregate score (which is also common practice). Cheers!

29 November 2022

• 18:2618:26, 29 November 2022 diff hist −46 m Mass Effect 3 →Plot: The timeline of ME3 is already specified in the Settings sub-section, so we don't need that in the Plot sub-section. Thanks! I also corrected an unrelated grammatical error farther down.

21 August 2022

• 14:3714:37, 21 August 2022 diff hist −16 m LeBron James →2019–2020: Fourth NBA championship
• 14:3314:33, 21 August 2022 diff hist −386 LeBron James →2018–2019: Injury and playoff miss: Combined two paragraphs about regular season into one. Removed an excessive citation. General cleanup
• 14:2414:24, 21 August 2022 diff hist +404 m LeBron James All citations with publisher=ESPN should have ESPN hyperlinked
• 14:1814:18, 21 August 2022 diff hist −440 LeBron James →Personal life: Cleaned up citations, adding detail and also removing excessive citations. Fleshed out banana boat crew section